sorry to all who wanted to be in on this battle, only enteries pmed to me by yesterday were posted, good luck to all and please remember the people in this battle are all toys and have only been writing half a year
constructive critisim only plz
Katze was the only half decent one...I'm with vegimite on toastOriginally posted by vegimite on toast
errrrrrr...... epod? these are very Toy
oh my god cess did a throwie surprise surfuckinprise
Homer: Marge? Since I'm not talking to Lisa, would you please ask her to pass me the syrup?
Marge: Dear, please pass your father the syrup, Lisa.
Lisa: Bart, tell Dad I will only pass the syrup if it won't be used on any meat product.
Bart: You dunkin' your sausages in that syrup homeboy?
Homer: Marge, tell Bart I just want to drink a nice glass of syrup like I do every morning.
Marge: Tell him yourself, you're ignoring Lisa, not Bart.
Homer: Bart, thank your mother for pointing that out.
Marge: Homer, you're not not-talking to me and secondly I heard what you said.
Homer: Lisa, tell your mother to get off my case.
Bart: Uhhh, dad, Lisa's the one you're not talking to.
Homer: Bart, go to your room.
yea! someone voted for me! ( i did a null vote like i usually do when i am in a battle)
edit: oh! i just realized this battle is for 1/2 year writers. i thought it said 1/2, like 1 OR 2 year writers. imm like a 3/4 year writer.
epod you need to steady your hand and you dont need to use prismas yet, save some money and use crayolas or something. thats what i use half the time. i voted katze he actually had some letter structure. people need to start breaking down their letters into pieces and then you will progress way faster
Epod, you suck ass.
Internet crews are played out.
Personally i liked trance,DNA,and Rise One..
I think he used Sharpies. There was no need. It looks etchy because you didnt layer it right. To make a sketch look clean you first 1. draw out the basic rough sketch, then erase bad lines. 2. darken and detail after erasing bad lines and cleaning up. 3. Go over in BIC. pen. Let ink dry. 4. Erase sketch leaving only ink, no pencil lines. 5. Darken detail in pen.
I think he actually did it in Sharpie with no pre-sketch, that's why there are no steady lines.
You can see a pencil outline in his attempt to make a D, which he failed horribly in doing. Pen sketches aren't hard.
Internet crews are played out.
I know they aren't hard, but sharpies arent the best for outlining, mainly filling.
some have potential ome r just weak\
but i voted cess i dunno why
"some beef is big and some beef is small but what yall call beef aint beef at all"
why do you alllll insist on battling? you need to preactice first. and get out of the toy forum. and you mustdo that by painting something and then someone who has not been told to post in the toy forum says you can leave the toy forum judging by your work. or something. and then when you get out of the toy forum you will still be toy but you can start battles. i feel like im just typing and not thinking so this probably wont make sense.
<span style=\'color:gray\'>peace</span><span style=\'color:green\'><span style=\'font-size:13pt;line-height:100%\'>close your mouth and open your eyes.</span></span><span style=\'color:gray\'>peace</span>
i dont know how to piece..so i just do bombs all the time.. my black books are loaded with them
rise ones was clean and crisp. looks stylish