loaf dont know if you want me to post this, but its on the sw detroit site

loaf

big ups to you

 

here is a new piece i just did,
let me know if you like it or not?
<_<
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nope!

 

blind
i still recomend you make sure all your outlines and uni be a nonstop solid line.
ex. the pink uni go all the way around the piece, and dont bring the color into the 3d fade
ex. is there evn an outline color around the letters?

plus when using a highlight color (like yellow in your case) try to keep all the highlights to one side (all on the left of the letter or all right or the top or the bottom)

 

stop messing with the fades.
seriously.

 

do you think it is really bad?

 

stick to two colors......... simple letter form, and follow mysfits tipz

 

haaahahahahahhh ................


...................... WORD

 

i actually like how you experiment colors quick...

keep goin'.... but yea like others said, try a couple of simples... its not degrading dont worry....

heres one i did back in october, and yes if you notice from the yellow, i live only by stock caps and the pressure aint good.... but not all the colors for some reason are as bad as the yellows

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I like the choice of colors minus the silver, thats all I can say.

 

pics of the latest endeavour.

crap one min for resizing

 

ok
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night shots after piece added
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unfinished stuff
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[Broken External Image]:http://img133.exs.cx/img133/4977/imag00108jo.jpg

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let me know what ya think

 

you can see some ppls strenght on their first years, and i guess for this guy its more on fills than can control

and the norm prolly is work on your letter structure first? but whos to tell whats the rules how to do graffiti....

the only BAD graffitis are graffitis that are bad imitations

oh any seckz, wusup? i dont see you online anymore

 

i agree that i go a bit hard on the shade but i am new to shading and i am just experimenting. i think that for not even a year of spraying i am doing some pretty good pieces.
it is very hard to master ur can control in south africa as we dont get any good can makes. we dont get montan,krylon,rusetleom, nothing. so we dont get any types of caps and we always have to use "half pressure".
but thanks for the commetns guys

 

yea same here, we live through stock caps and cheap paint... but no worries, as someone said <i think zuel> keep sketchin for style and keep paintin for can control =)

heres another from dec. 18?

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Im feelin that green its hot, very nice

 

thats true.
but with that said.
look at his fills! they arent even that great! im advising him to work on one thing. you cant just release an amazing peace all of a sudden, you have to work on each step.
im not saying im a king or anything close to that, im just saying it makes sense to work on the more important things. cuz after all. letters rule everything when it comes to style.

 

i got no replies on my last post on 121. :angry: it seems everyone is to busy bitching about everyone bitching!!