disregard my retarded L i dont what happen when i was drawin that. i finally found a K too. crits??[/QUOTE] bump from 2 pages ago. can i get more then one crit please??? with a cherry on top
Leaks, not bad, your keeping it simple. Your k kinda looks like a h though. Unsuccesful i think thts cool, clean it up a bit though. Ene, the bottom bars of your e's are to long and thin, fatten them up abit. Been trying to get a nice throw down so i can start painting it. Came up with these, crits would be helpful. View attachment 417038 View attachment 417039 Messd up on the z i think. View attachment 417040
i dont like that hump thing on the z. idk maybe if you cleaned it up tho. anyone know what those are called anyway?
Zire: I agree that first hump is really messed up. Also the R and A in the first one are way to similar. Leaks: I like the A, but thats about it. The rest is to plain i think Sac: Pretty sick, try to keep it all the same size, but other than that nice. Changed around the W and S a bit, feel like i kinda fucked it up though View attachment 417197 That and a new two letter View attachment 417198 thoughts on either?
@incognito i thought you wrote thos. its a good thing you changed that w, that o is starting to look like a face. see the eye and eyebrow? you should expand on that idk. and the bottom of the s should be thicker like your 2 letter. which is good btw but i cant tell if thats a 2 or a z...
suggestions ? [Broken External Image]:http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/isa1.sized.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/ISa2.sized.jpg
@zire exactly. @gentrifried why do you do the curves in the dot in the i? and i feel like the i should be the same size with the other two letters. other than those crits its dope but whats the thing next to the top one?
the curves in the i dot is a smiling unibrow kind of guy as for the lil thing next to the top one Im not sure myself a curved bolt with a smilely face perhaps sometimes i wake up and am like what the F*** was i thinking last night thanks for the feedback much appreciated
[Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELDividerThrow.jpg from late august/early september cant remember i know the e is way to big flare - your letters seem to go from best to worst, work on the secong leg of your r, and i think the top of your a is too big, other than that it has pretty good flow though twos - i like the style you got going except dont make the top of your s so big in your first sketch crits please
My joints Again My first time goin out and doin' graffiti I started small Trash, slides, whateva no walls yet. Criqs and Fries(jokes) both appreciated(Could use da laugh rite now)
@shpel your e is redonkculously big other than that its dope and what do you mean by the second leg on the r? the right or the left.. @getrifried lol i thought you just half assed an eye and i lmaoed when you said you didnt know what it was. @jayz theres no picture...
@ jayz nvm its there now... hehe. whats pic number 2? and try to use bars im not feeling that huge arrow ontop of the j and im liking that sdent throw just clean it up
isa- your I is to big and none of your letters go together (the s is all rounded and the a isnt). flare- basicaly what shpel said but maybe you could change the tops to all face the same direction. shpel-your e is way too big, your p is a bit boring compared to the rest of your letters and your l looks like a backwards J. jayz- read the new to graffiti thread and stick to paper for a while. good work all of you though (cept for jayz jp )
your first time out and you hit a playground slide, what looks like the side of a house, and an orange storage container with red paint... not to mention horrible can control. i would look for some chill spots to work on that. but you should stay on paper for a while anyways. that being said, clean your throw up a bit and try putting some style into your letters.