yo hash, get rid of the shroom for now work on your letters, specially the K, and maybe do something to the A, I'd tell you to keep the shroom if you had better colors, work on that also. Sorry I can't tell you it's good. Keep on pushing that pen!
GOOOO SIMMMPLLLEEEEEE STOP ADDING STUPID LINES AND UN NEEDED BUMPS your letters look nothing like a Z I or P
You write noyu? Is it pronounced "NO U?" If it is, thats lulz. The throw looks pretty good. I think the Y could use a little work though. Other than that, it looks pretty fresh.
weakfingers- i like it everything flows nice halfgangsta-i like it but ur letters are a little spaced out thanks for the crits i tried to make this flow a little better [/IMG] its a little out of proportion cuz i had to do it quick but let me know what you think
are my posts invisible or something? DEN-i'm diggin the tag. loookin nice could i get a crit or two ^^^
well i use it as a DE but a lot of people are saying it looks like AE so maybe it is? it's really just two letters i just thought looked cool together but thanks for the crit on the E.
Ok I went much simpler [Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0120092149.jpg any better?
Ohh ok. Now I see the D. It looked like a lowercase A without the line in the center. No problem. Try making the extensions from your E come off horizontally, instead of at an angle. zipper- try making the lines on your Z come in more. Try making your P's have more of a round top. Work on that E, I cant really make it out. Try a different style that fits with the rest of the letters.
no pest dont listen to jacki chan hes chinese and cant see well obviously ... ur throw needs to be simpler its got unnesesary shit... throws should be simple there not made to be burners lulz at least thats how i feel