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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. okibi

    okibi Senior Member

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    Thanks guys.
    Good to know my tag has progressed so far.
    I'll ditch the underlines and keep at it.

    Den1: Not feeling the 'D' and keep everything on the same level.
    unsuccsessfull: Can't see it too well from that angle, a straight on shot would be much easier to crit.
     
  2. unsuccsessfull

    unsuccsessfull Senior Member

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    look on the other page for a straight angle
     
  3. quithaten

    quithaten New Member

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  4. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    still, not one crit

    ned - your d needs some work

    den - not feeling your D either

    meszo - looks good, id lose the line in the o

    zoner? - cant really see it, your R looks nice
     
  5. Black Flag

    Black Flag Elite Member

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    idk shpel, I would crit it, but I am not just really feeling it.

    Needs more style perhaps? For the letters in your name you could probably get away with getting a little more crazy with your tag then a simple style.
     
  6. fitzy36

    fitzy36 Senior Member

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    some old pics of tags.. i'll post better ones soon

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  7. SNAP!

    SNAP! Senior Member

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  8. fitzy36

    fitzy36 Senior Member

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  9. unsuccsessfull

    unsuccsessfull Senior Member

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  10. respERATION

    respERATION Banned

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  11. MARTYRaz

    MARTYRaz Banned

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    for resp...i dont even kno wtf that says so do us all a favor....go bench for a while...take a walk around ur city and look at all the tags...take pice and study that shit...dont just go out and write any random shit that u think looks like graff...what u think graff looks like??? i can tell u write now that is shit...fuck...heres some shit....again...
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  12. Masta T

    Masta T Senior Member

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  13. BAGS

    BAGS Senior Member

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    you need to work on your letters and lose all those doo-das
     
  14. MARTYRaz

    MARTYRaz Banned

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    yea its a lil too drippy...thinned that acrylic too much...didnt even squeeze the mop...shits dripped all over my kicks...
     
  15. sellers E.

    sellers E. Senior Member

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    heres what i write

    Go on and hate....




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  16. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    Resp- It isn't really my style, but I can dig it.
    I would just say to slow down a bit, try and clean that shit up.
    Maybe wait until the bus stops before you do your thing, feel me?
     
  17. sellers E.

    sellers E. Senior Member

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  18. Capo Izi

    Capo Izi Senior Member

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    Been trying to develop a tag for a while....says Caporegime...

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    Crits?
     
  19. NouveauP

    NouveauP Elite Member

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    Daylo- Your hand is a out of proportion. Try and make every letter the same size, and maybe a capital L to get everything the same size... And on a personal note, don't bite my arrow line....

    As for Capo, it looks pretty sick. There's a little too much going on with the "PO" and the line going through the A kind of looks bad. But I like the curve your handstyle takes. Keep it up.
     
  20. Capo Izi

    Capo Izi Senior Member

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    Thanks, yeah I gotta work on the middle section.....and there is a line through for the A to have the middle line and to connect to the R.....thanks though, I'll keep developing