^^^I don't like how you closed the R. Janek dont give up you got a great style on paper you just have to emulate the style on the wall, Like yarbles said its way diffrent. The only thing I would change with the throw is put a notch on the N to give it more definition and legibility. 5 minutes in paint and bam here's the idea i kinda had for your K
Werse - How much was the paint? Fix the E's and the R. Remove that line that goes from the S into the R as well. Janek - You have potential, just keep practicing on walls, and you should improve. Deceptuos - Go a bit simpler, but I'm loving your character.
thanks weakfingers, i see what you mean with the K now, that looks a lot better, and what do you mean by putting a notch on my N?
Maybe he means something like this: You know the lower-case n has that little line going up, past where the horizontal line curves? That.
^^^what he said I mean liek the A and the N are the same with the exception of the line in the A. So you might want to put a line in the top of the n or even define the shape of the letter abit more to improve the legibility. Ill try to draw what i mean tomorrow but its super late and I got some porn to watch.
jokos- you shouldnt paint walls yet thats really bad stick to the books [Broken External Image]:http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo03/a3/d8/79a0b374439b.jpg crits??????
Venetian - I'm not really feeling the paint dripping, but the rest is cool. Strangers - I'm still not liking that M, but the last one looks sick. Stussy - I like that a lot, good job. Grime - I don't like the G. Make the top end come out a bit more. I don't like the M or the E either. Maybe I just don't like it squiggly
Grime- Make the lines not so zigzag and squiggly. The dot is not on top of the I and the M in my opinion is really ugly.
havnt been on in awhile..sorry....havnt done much decept - new to graff thread janek - i like your "jan" throw more than the jn for obvious reasons name the fresh - work on shadow...reform j..keep practicing venet - not into that style..dont know much about it but it looks good stussy - fresh as hell grime - lovin the m and e but i would change the zig zag in the e and the g crits? tag and throw.. [Broken External Image]:http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0001-3.jpg