not rely on the ()()() shapes so much. Make it look like it's own object, not a series of repeating shapes, ya dig?
Ahh yeah i see. truth be told, i was almost aiming for repetitive circular shapes. I meant it for more of a quick throw anywhere you go as opposed to an eye-catching piece. But I'll mess around with it going off ya'lls advice, and see if there's anything i can dig on more. Definitely appreciate hearing what you think. (that wasn't sarcasm)
Mine is quick, but not the same shape over and over. try making each letter only one or two strokes each.
I mean I hear what you're saying, I'm just not a big fan of that letter styling (not joking on anybody's throw, it's just not for me) And the only letter in mine that has more than one stroke is the "w" By the way I'm not trying to be argumentative, only trying to completely grasp what people are trying to explain. Definitely open to learning if you didn't notice hah.
[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0601092142.jpg critsssss Earn- I like everything except the the first legs on the R and N, thats just my opinion though. Yac- The only thing i really like is the A kind of. The Y isnt really legible Kem- Better but I think your E and M are too fat Smooth- Always liked your shit, your E isnt really tardo cakes either haha. Bottom 2 are the best.
i like it zarb, ide take the lil squigly out of the middle and make it a little more fat but yea it dont look bad.
Zarb, Try something new, You do the same shitty throw over and over. It annoys me to see you not progressing at all. Dank, proportion
Don't be cocky you fuck that shit is wack and disgusting. Go back and work for a few more months then come back
im sure a lot of people dont, but i think that looks tight. maybe do something extra with the E though
Read his wack ass tag inside the l It says wrul hahahaha but that aint much better Don't be cocky kid you just get shit on by everyone. Shit bs police beat me to it
I do the same one cause i wanna lock down the style so I have a throw I can always do when Im out painting. Does it suck? Cause if the whole style is fucked then w.e Ill start over
To you two, for the most part. Basically, fuck you. i'm not being cocky, all I said was "I like it so far." i never said I couldn't improve but I'm sick and fucking tired of seeing the same exact fucking letter style come out of EVERY single post I see. Go through them. They all look THE SAME and most (with BigBlue and Crust actually being the helpful exception) you l337 graff fucks say "Oh thats cool." No, fuck that, and fuck what you think for the most part. I know I can improve, no shit, everyone can. RANT; You shitheads come into the toy forums solely to talk shit to people it seems. That must make you feel like you have a big dick, that you can do all this on the internet. This shit was intended to help others. Not talk shit, which is apparently all anyone on here can do. ESPECIALLY "Mr. Yarbles" commenting on my "Wack ass tag." lol. Way to be constructive with your crits, shithead. Glad you got an awesome laugh out of my attempt. Fuck how long you've been writing, you're still as big of a piece of shit as any.