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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. sprout

    sprout Senior Member

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    skizm

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    more crits please
     
  2. EasyLife

    EasyLife Member

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    i didn't take the time to look through shit so i appologize if someone already said this, i'm diggin the bubbles, the shading on them is a good idea.
    i think the breaks with the arrows/doodads whatever you wanna call em is over done, maybe take a couple out.
    and then just work on keeping the width of the letters similar.
    especially on the S Z and M
     
  3. EasyLife

    EasyLife Member

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    sorry double post
     
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  4. sprout

    sprout Senior Member

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  5. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    The second one's a little better but take a look at the new to graffiti thread, start using bars and get simples down.
     
  6. Hearr!

    Hearr! Senior Member

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    ai711.photobucket.com_albums_ww115_hear2_IMG_12.jpg
    for a battle on a different forum.
     
  7. KidReny!

    KidReny! Senior Member

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  8. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

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    KidReny, shut up. That is fucking simple.
     
  9. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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    thats not really simple at all...........
     
  10. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    the top is. lol
    but overall that piece aint too bad, just work keepin your on your bars consistent. keep sketchin though, your on the right track
     
  11. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

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    The letters are really simple, with minimal extensions. It's not as simple as they get, but it IS, in fact, a simple.
     
  12. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    No matter how simple it is, it's still not very good. Shut up, you all suck, that's why you post here...
     
  13. thebigman

    thebigman Senior Member

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    hear: not really fealling that style
    sprout: im feeling it dog keep it up
    critics???
     
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  14. medacog1

    medacog1 Senior Member

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    ai43.tinypic.com_i3dy81.jpg

    I realy hated this when i was do ( the K the most) but i liked how i connected it...what do yo uthink?
     
  15. sellers E.

    sellers E. Senior Member

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    the big man- the throw is alright, i guess. i would go super simple plane with that peice.
    medacog1- not feelin it. if its a throw work on it... if its a simp do bars.

    i havnt been on in a month or 2... i felt like posting this free style.
    ai221.photobucket.com_albums_dd85_sellersphotobucket_ray2.jpg
    crits?
     
  16. Manupro7

    Manupro7 Member

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    lol you say the same thign for every crit
     
  17. DUNSY

    DUNSY Senior Member

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    Sellers i wouldn't draw gir it's overdone but your letters are nice tough
    medacog, it's a really bad pic so i cant really judge
    thebigman, i like your second one but why is the z an other color ?and work on your tag
    hearr not really feeling it try to make it more intresting
    sprout nice coloring

    something i drew last night

    ai40.tinypic.com_64ibfm.jpg
     
  18. HalfGangstaShit

    HalfGangstaShit Elite Member

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  19. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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    reminds me alot of dsub
     
  20. BIGdreamSCHEME

    BIGdreamSCHEME Senior Member

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    new style I've been messing around with, just looking for whether or not you guys think it's worth pursuing or not
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    some crits
    tearz, the throw is wack, the simple is on point
    panik, wack, use bars homie
    knar, pretty dope
    dunsy, looks like a dsub bite like ^ said