well duh but his complaint was that he only does throws. gezr is a joke. but some people dont do pieces.

 

gezra: if your going to post something please try and take your time. Take the time to actually fill in your letters. scribbling across it and then writing to the side "shitty fill in" doesn't automatically make it ok. i still cant make out with the first letter is and like everyone keeps saying the extension on the R doesnt look good.

shaolin:I really like what your doing. I kind of wish you would loose the little hole/gaps in between your letters though. you do it in all your letters except the E. Also if it was me I would get rid of that little money sign cus it looks kind of cheesy.

i hope these were good enough crits :/

 

Yeah good crits but not sure if i could take away the holes since that how i draw them...ill see how it looks without them though

Great thanks!!!

 

gezra-loose all the add ons and try to do the fill in's better
sneak-i like it but loose the money sign and the holes in most the letters
luster-pretty good start, continue playing around with it

another throwie. Crits?

 

Clos- keep all your letters the same size and don't make them get bigger as it goes on.

 

try the word Clops. like cyclops. clos is kinda boring.

 

ya i know what you mean, that happens to me alot

 

took Crust0ner's idea, tryed doing clops, C and L are a little smaller then the O, P, and S. what do you guys think i should do. Crits??

 

i can tell when you go to form a new letter you start from the top and you kind of overlap each word making each letter get bigger and bigger. Start lower. and also your S at the bottom looks disporportioned compared to the top.

 

exactly ^^^

 

I wrote JNA. Its short for JENGA. Crits please.

 

jenga-keep the J the same size and dont try to not add those "lumps" on the N and A

thanks guys for the help. did i do it any better. Crits???

 

still doin it

 

KInda shit at throwss need some lil nice helpful critsssss

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and the arrow is coverin a shitty mistake my bad

 

thanks milk box for helping me again but i just keep getting it wrong, ill practice alot

 

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Marker tag
on a wall
lol it looks like paper

 

one liner