squint - i like the S and T in the one not outlined in blue, and i like the lower case N in the very first one
some of my ugly shit... real crits guys i need the best you can give...writting nearly 10 months... My name is Vire05 you can say new here... peace..
sak nice clean structure, i reccomend bending the left bar on the K less but keep it bent. nuce nice letters, ugly extensions. also if ur gunna color, color in the 3D too, otherwise it looks half-assed
^^ the bottom one to me is the best out of these two..the top one I think needs a bit more work.was ur markers dieing cause it looks like it was.
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Kide....Colors not bad..but its just too....wiggly...not terrible Squint...huge improvement form your last stuff, but the lightning bolot curve in the T has to go Slack...The bottom simples looking good...but not feeling that top piece at all... Sak & Nuce both looking good. Been looking at some Virus & BS Police in the big boy thread, plus some west coast stuff, and I felt like fucking with one of those crazy fills...not quite finished yet....crits? View attachment 499396
my only crit for that is that it's in the wrong thread. go play with the big boys, or even intermediate. actually, 3D could use some work, i see what ur doing by extending it, but i dont think it's a good move. other than that it's beautiful