most of these are old. waiting to get some flicks in my e-mail. i hate not having a camera. oldest - newest, i think? -no finished flick of this straight letter.^ i know a couple of those have been posted. this obviously isnt all of my work. just giving EST what he asked for, a representation of where im at. pretty sure im at least "intermediate"
not bad, that last throw is pretty cool. on that red one u missed the drop shadow and it could have used a bunch of cuts and cleanup. it would have looked a lot better ive always wanted to try to fire extinguisher.
yeah, that red one really ticks me off. could have looked a whole lot better, was drunk, high, tired, dark out, and not as good as i am now. learn from mistakes.
been messin with the sketch from a while back. gonna keep working with it to learn what works and what doesnt. crits? edit- looking at it on here helped me realize a bunch of stuff i want to change lol
heres a new one i think ive found a new style ,but idk, and upstate i cant really see much of the letters. if im suposed to? but if thats a type of style you got and like keep fuckin with it, but you could probaly loose of of those extensions. no too much but like 4 for 3
Aight. View attachment 513234 A is to fat and stalky, R is just whack, and the city scape isn't to good.
Messer: Pretty clean looking overall, but the Y definitely needs some work. Another thing I found kinda weird is how your Y and L have similar styles, but it appears as if you were going for different styles on each letter. jupsick: Is that WINR? If so, your W needs a lot of work. It looks really out of place and disproportionate. Your i needs some work too. Your N and R look good though. Upstate: I wouldn't have any idea what that said if you didn't have INZO written beside it. That doesn't belong in here, imo. cocacola: It doesn't look too bad. Try cleaning up the lines a bit and work on that T- if there's a letter that looks out of place, it's definitely the T. Other than that, your extensions need a bit of tweaking as well. Just keep playin' with different angles and clean it up a little. Queezy: The letters look good, but I'm sure you know that separating the letters 3 v. 3 like that looks odd. Already posted in the toy thread, lookin' for more crits/ comments: View attachment 513235
I seperated them because coloring doing the letters through the spine thing sucks. Plus it just started as a sketch I was planning for a spot. EDIT: Aight fuckers you have until October 5th to do the renob SKETCH battle. 1 WEEK Send me your entries damnit.