suparjafar, that s needs work just something about it that doesn't sit right other than that all the bars are correct and nice, maybe try overlapping some letters for that oldskool touch, blast on some colour a nice background and a lil char and you will have a nice piece, and sorry for keep talking about oldskool am a pure oldskool junkie !
jmann i hear ya bro i started doin graff in like 1993......i wish i still had all my photos i have a huge tote packed full. i probably had over 7000 pics . but they all got lost in a house i lived at that had a fire.
prane one i like it, you should just move the letters a bit closer together, mostly the p and r ive been working my hand a bit more, writing normal, fast, clean, and cursive, than a little more stylish. plus lots of easy 3d plus shades and blocks, about 3 pages today probably, just front. heres my piece, started as a quick sketch, than i likes it so i turned it into a piece, added dome extras too.
NEON <----- Exactly like that dude. Simple. Your trying wayyyyyyyyy to hard. The only decent thing in that is the second N. Work on throwies first
yea influenced by old school writers and i tried to bring my p and my r together but i had a hard time next time ill try to bring them closer
i do practice simples way more, i just dont bother posting them. i was trying too hard though, its just when i look at all the amazing pictures in my graffiti world book, i want to do it, or something thats looks not boring lol.
looking good redeyes....just need to work on steadying that hand...looks shaky on the outline, and the #D of missing a bit in the bottom pic
Neon just rock the simples anyway. Boring in art is basically relative. Prane, the only thing I don't like is the random arrow coming off the n. I think it looks really good as a tweaked simp but the random extensions off the A and N are out of place. My 2 cents. crits on mah simp? [Broken External Image]:http://www.flickr.com/photos/sonny_-chalk-_t/4096966839/in/set-72157622648059189/
looks like ur S could be bigger. the top bar of the E imo shouldnt be squished like that. and im not sure if connecting the H to the E is a good idea unless you did the same thing maybe with the S and H to balance it out. thats my opinion tho so take it how you will.
Yea Shem that S is cramped, just keep at it, it will eventually work. I'm also not feeling the upper portion of the E. Sinkilla- maybe a little more simple? lose the black squigglys. Sorry I feel its just a little sloppy. Sico- again shits solid, u should throw those up on a wall, what are you waiting for...Christmas? I don't think I could blend 2 sharpies to save my life...any suggestions? [Broken External Image]:http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/6277/1003146e.jpg