your O's look REALLY doofy, in a good way. i'd go with the first S. here, i have an idea, try opening your S up more, y'know what i mean? like the medium/lower left part of your S.
looks like it says Dops. i'd make the ifrst O more like the second. and i think the first S looks better. the second looks like a more pointier version of Lesen SDK's S.
that first O is kinda wack. id just keep it connected. or put a face in it but not too too toy lol but yeah at first i thought it said dops...just sayin
yeah, that's what i meant about the S. try to tone down the opening on the S just a TAD, and you'll be set to smash shit IMO. i also don't like the thing on the period at the end of your toss. is..is that an exclamation point? if it is, make the bottom part of it less wide.