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View attachment 529766 exchange with akor Rano - http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185 when you get the basics down you can start to incorporate your own style, but until then, stick with simple shit, and learn how to tag..
Rano, ill be straight, I don't like it at all. You've definitely got a shit load of artistic talent, but your structure needs A LOT of work. The drippy style could be tight, but clean up the letterforms so they look like letters not amorphous blobs. For the bottom two, again, work on the structure
rano - couldnt read any of them except for the last two. dont lose the structure of the letters in favor of something that looks cool. mawks - that akor exchange looks pretty good and that sead peice that seesh bumped is mad good. something i may be painting soon, crits
Thanks man, i really appreciate it, shit looks sick! Rano, I agree with what xSonnyTx said, you gotta get those basics down. There is a lot that you can do with drips and blobs, but you gotta work with it, a lot. Get that structure down!
you can color good...Wheres the stucture tho..... I like what you got going with the last one tho If you'd practice letter stucture more and incorporate that style...You'd have something going
Well I guess i don't get crits... Acid I like your structure but the pattern on you 3-d is kind of off, and your fill is little patchy
duktwo inter. thread. rano you have some nice ideas and have artistic skills, but have no structure, startfrom simples im sure youll do good based on those sketches bored, some more roes throws/handies View attachment 529859 View attachment 529860 View attachment 529861
^Make sure you make those dots bigger or add a line to signify the hole for the O and E. People might think you write Poes.
I don't like the dots. Maybe try making curves instead? The negative space of that E also doesn't work with no holes in those letters.
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