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so I tried to make a good looking 2 letter throw. Here's what I got. It's off in some places but you get the idea View attachment 544405 crits?
ayo lemme get some crits lol @emptycan- thats dope i like it work on that shadow a lil and its all good
Wow, shell, thats way better! Just fix that ugly ass S. Make it fatter...a lot fatter. And make W wider. And emptycan: That is awesome. Leave that exclamation for sure
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Yeah you ruined those walls pretty bad. Paint some where like a chill place till you get your CC down (can control). I don't like your bomb all that much, but on paper it looks alright. Oh and I wouldn't use the wholes for eyes in the D, shit I'd just leave the plain. If you must though, keep it simple add something small to show the character. Edit: Upon further review FILL IN YOUR 3D. Thats it, keep it up and off walls that can be seen for now.
I'm assuming those green two pieces are 'DL'. Work on your letter structure. It looks like Gumby got put through a meat grinder.
vagrant, work on flowing your letters more, like making them even those are way off, the a's oversized, the end of the r makes no sense to me its like draggin the ground