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what im i doing wrong i like my style I just dont get what you dont like be specific

 

Yo patchy that last read one was decent but idk what to tell u besides that..:/

 

well everyone tells me to bite the keyboeard dut IMO im past that

 

I know I'm most likely the worst on here
but here goes nothing http://www.flickr.com/photos/48090026@N05/

 

yeah voice just start out with simps then add so of your own flair to it

 

Different style - Better?

 

Check the new to graff thread,
and stop posting your age.

 

go simple, something like this voice.
make sure you can draw it neat and simple before bending letters and making your own styles

 

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bump for crits

VOICE-Do simple letters. Use bars. don't try too hard
BEAR-no simpler. but... good use of bars
SLM-It's ok. Lose all of the wack extensions and try to keep all your letters and bars the exact same width for now.

 

Idk patchy I think your alryte just need some time and work and you when you develope your own unique style that's when they'll get off your nuttz ha

Bear ...I like it, I like the A more than anything but I feel like I've seen it b4, anywho your
B looks like an A but just with a bar pullin back from the second leg but its much better

Stotr- that O catches my eye n the rest is pretty good too

And yes bump alec's statement

 

Patchy!
i think the problem is there is no consistency in style. the letters dont go together very well, and even the letters them selves are all over the place. Your M is great in my opinion and its because its constant! look at the top left corner of the S, that swirl is kinda useless and takes away from the letter.

my last little peice of advice is this. like i tell everyone KEEP IT SIMPLE. just for now.

 

SHITS DOOOOOPE!
clean up it, outline it with shit or something cause I already know that'll turn out good.

It's excellent bro, I wish I could make shit like you, I guess practice makes perfect

but IMO the S can be much better if you try

 

thanks ShER now thats what i was looking fo

 

Yo Skech battles are back check my sig, or go to the toy call outs. For more info

 

Getting better, stot.

 

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crits?

 

dumb it down a bit but i think that would look nice if it was well painted

 

cleaned up.. a bit