Rewt, I'd suggest bringing the left part down, it'd look better in my opinion.

 

ZEST if your not gonna take peoples crits then just fucking stop posting dude.. we dont want to see sketched shit, we dont want to see the same exact thing we just saw drawn again, we dont want any of that.. go back and ready every single post for like the past 3 pages.

REWT- you said, "writers around here know what it is..." but dude, you should want everyone to know what it is..to layman's your just a person writing a V, wouldnt you rather be thought of as a, "mathmetician writing graff" idk just my opinion.

 

It's not my fault if the people that think it's a 'V' didn't make it through 8th grade math...

 

just an opinion man, i like when people can read my graff. makes me feel good when i hear at a party "did you see that rosie piece off the 190". by all means dude, keep doin what you do. if its gettin you big ups congrats.. i just am givin my opinion.

 

I know where you're coming from.

When I make the bottom part of the symbol that does look like a 'v' with the slant it looks funky. It doesn't look like a throw. I think Crust is right about dropping the left part down a little bit.

It's an abstract throwie. I want people to think a little bit.

 

toy- not a bad idea make it more disticd tho
zest3-make your bottems tha same size i suppose
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crits?

 

KAN - Do you just keep posting the same thing asking for crits? It seems every time you post it is the exact same...

 

no actualy first post of this in here so...

 

KAN your bomb on the right looks decent. needs work. deff looks bit, your thing in the middle is ugly. too fat. the N should have openings if the rest of it does. loose the extensions. they dont look good.

 

By sketch, do you mean like i should color and shit ?

 

no draw lines dont pick up the pencil when you do just draw

 

kan-bullshit thats ur first post,i told u that the shadow under the N doesnt make sense and u can see where u erased it hahaha

 

Just a few quick ones, toy or not? crits?

 

go simple and lose all those extensions

 

Ight, the basics of the letters decent at least?

 

id say the 2nd one is a little better but both should look alot simpler...i know everyone on this site says the same thing but do keyboard letters first and once u get those down try to get ur own style goin. i wouldnt really call those throws either

 

Keyboard?

 

look down at the letters your typing on and do those ...do bars just keep it simple for a while

 

haha thanks ^.^