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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. One Evil

    One Evil Elite Member

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  2. gumOnShoe

    gumOnShoe Elite Member

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    dude, before anything, try to get your lines to come out cleaner.
    you got that parkinson's hand lol, BUT, i do too.
    i find it easier to keep a loose hand though, and draw my lines faster y'know, like flick my pencil to get lines looking crisp.
    this combats the shakiness i get when sketching. try it.
    like i had a king smack my book once, and he did his piece SO fast, lines came out ruler straight. fucker freestyled what i was writing at the time too.
     
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  3. Shay70

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    a few things i did in my blackbook
    the purple one is hard to read cuz i lost my white pen but w.e
    crits please
     

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  4. Inlyn08

    Inlyn08 Senior Member

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    The first one, the 3D is inconsistent. Not sure if that E should be as large as it is. The letters need work, pretty much. The second one.. throw that out. No disrespect, but.. you're right it is hard to read. But, not because of the colors. Because of the letters.
    Last one.. is my pick of the three, to be honest.
     
  5. RADAWG

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  6. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    where the good shit lmfao fucking toys
    jk
     
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  7. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    I cannot comprehend.
    1.5k
     
  8. PegCityBoy

    PegCityBoy Senior Member

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    OneEvil - structure structure structure
    Zennegen - what gum said
    RaDawg - not bad, all id say is put a little more care into the dropshaddow and forcefield, kinda reminds me of rihno or w/e, also work on the E, ark is good

    Spam Goes Red
    afarm3.static.flickr.com_2047_4513701146_d087842a28.png
    ignore the shitty hand
     
  9. Culture_Shock

    Culture_Shock Senior Member

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  10. Sesh-it-up

    Sesh-it-up Guest

    lmao bumo dat
     
  11. sezer

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  12. TheToy

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    If anything, you do the same shit he does. If you were the pioneer, you'd be sponsored.

    But...

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  13. AlecR2K

    AlecR2K Senior Member

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    SPAM, its looking good but the M is way too wide. tighten that shit up and keep going.
     
  14. zennegen

    zennegen Banned

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    thetoy, you realize nobody thinks you're funny right? you're just a troll that should have been banned forever ago. you don't post flicks and you don't post constructive criticism, real talk, just got fuck yourself.
     
  15. GASM!

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    Quick B/W sketch..

    ai414.photobucket.com_albums_pp230_RockstarLDG_photo.jpg

    Color scheme attempted with Ironlak colors in Photoshop using eyedropper tool..

    ai414.photobucket.com_albums_pp230_RockstarLDG_GASM_PIECE.jpg

    Crits on letters? Colors? Anything appreciated.
     
  16. PegCityBoy

    PegCityBoy Senior Member

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    fuckin kids, give crits to get em
     
  17. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    Do you even do either of those?
     
  18. NICCSACC

    NICCSACC Banned

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    that gazm is kinda bush. learn to use your whole arm to make smooth lines. it makes it look more legit if you wanna call it that. ive seen soooo much worse tho.
     
  19. GASM!

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    Thanks for the advice! :)
     
  20. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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