some slop im just fucking with.. i know if i took my time and re did this it would look much better but had to goto work ...and if i fixed the S some more and made the E a tad bigger.. [Broken External Image]:http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/4835/dscf4823t.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/774/dscf4826.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/9085/dscf4824.jpg not finished.. prob wont finish but well see. crits.
dude, before anything, try to get your lines to come out cleaner. you got that parkinson's hand lol, BUT, i do too. i find it easier to keep a loose hand though, and draw my lines faster y'know, like flick my pencil to get lines looking crisp. this combats the shakiness i get when sketching. try it. like i had a king smack my book once, and he did his piece SO fast, lines came out ruler straight. fucker freestyled what i was writing at the time too.
a few things i did in my blackbook the purple one is hard to read cuz i lost my white pen but w.e crits please
The first one, the 3D is inconsistent. Not sure if that E should be as large as it is. The letters need work, pretty much. The second one.. throw that out. No disrespect, but.. you're right it is hard to read. But, not because of the colors. Because of the letters. Last one.. is my pick of the three, to be honest.
OneEvil - structure structure structure Zennegen - what gum said RaDawg - not bad, all id say is put a little more care into the dropshaddow and forcefield, kinda reminds me of rihno or w/e, also work on the E, ark is good Spam Goes Red ignore the shitty hand
http://i43.tinypic.com/35bdx06.jpg crits? +++++ pic is too big, click the link to see it i need a pattern/colour help. anyone care to help?
thetoy, you realize nobody thinks you're funny right? you're just a troll that should have been banned forever ago. you don't post flicks and you don't post constructive criticism, real talk, just got fuck yourself.
Quick B/W sketch.. Color scheme attempted with Ironlak colors in Photoshop using eyedropper tool.. Crits on letters? Colors? Anything appreciated.
that gazm is kinda bush. learn to use your whole arm to make smooth lines. it makes it look more legit if you wanna call it that. ive seen soooo much worse tho.
gasm it would look better if you try a more simple throwy,looks bad,that m is bad,the s could be mistaken for a c and the g is really bad crits?? [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3258.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3257.jpg ^ bic pen freestyle