iv seen at least 3 kids on this site writin faze before

 

who the fucc would write faze?? ROTF

 

for the homies blog

 

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eh. quick pen freestyle. stuck on my shite letters.

 

dode write that thats way better than niccsacc i think, you should also try writing lana or whatever

 

thx for the crit brahhh... da kine!
aloha!
mabye ill try LANA i might do some dumb shit like xovz or some difficult stuffys wit my lettaz brahh. aloha brudduh

 

kre1-just work on the letters, maybe do some simples based on your pretty sick handstyles
illlogic-make that Z look more like a Z, and maybe add an extention on the U
niccsacc-try putting some characters in your name, or develop into a piece

crits on this

 

Wildstyle throwie? Mabye ill make it happen

 

niccsacs- that venom is nice, but the M looks like its an N trying to fight itsself into an M, let that letter flow into its self alittle bit more.

 

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semi happy with it.

crits

 

First picture... kinda fucked it up but I was using some weird as markers the Characters are fucked I know.

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top bar of the S could be longer and some orange in that backround would set it off yellow is a bit bright by itself

 

i really dont know what you take graffiti for no offense, but this shit isnt just a pastime, you need to work on bars for a long ass time or something

 

bizzibump

 

quick simple sketch...reminds me of a shoe logo? i duno

 

hah yo thats a good one, yeah man do straights it does remind me of a shoe logo though haha

 

Empty I think the s is finne maybe a little longer if anything. I like the style

 

what you think about it? first one is my name. (sorry about the strange thing on M - my scanner is dirty or something... )
any crits?

 

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obviously not too good, just working on a new style.
crits?

StayHyE, everything looks great except the PHOTOS text, way too distorted vertically. Also, the shadowing on IT IN is wayyyyy colorful.

viseversa101, you need to work on bars. none of the letters are made up of bars, but you really need to work with bars first. i think you know what those are. also, make sure the letters are next to each other, not that spaced apart.

fakiee, BARS, BARS, BARS. You have such potential, the A is really dope, but everything else just looks mooshed together. the Sun one is waayyyyyy off balance, you can't have one letter really big and the others smaller, it looks.. unbalanced. your 3D is good, just make sure all the letters are proportioned correctly, and USE BARS.