bump this toy's wack ass book! Amereto: i like the originality and the art but focus on structure. it's one of those situations where i like the graffiti as art but not as graffiti asper: make all the bars the same size unless you are trying to do the thing where the bars get progressively bigger like a flair, other wise make it more evident that, that is what you are doing. meph: i want to see a left to right piece. other wise it's not too bad just work on flowing it better. and make the 3-d go to one point for the whole word instead of different points for different letters.
View attachment 560325 id let that run, but i wouldnt let anything from safe... goin to bomb peace toys.
Nice shit black, don't mind the skinny letters, but still good... [Broken External Image]:http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5554/picture38w.jpg Seperation in the book fucked up my E. Otherwise, anything else bad?
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Some recent shit... That one for a friend who has his own site for story writing, poems etc check it out http://www.yourtwocents.co.uk/
A356 you have some nice background goin on but your letter structure needs work..actually in the 2nd pic the letter aint too bad and match up i bet it wouldve fit on one page...its not that huge and is spaced out poorly..ak way too much space, fr little to no... safes paper less complicated..
Just some quick shit I've had in my mind for a while. Don't care much for constructive crits just say whether you like it/hate it..or anything along those lines would be appreciated... View attachment 560606 Says GS kings