well im just a toy as seen on the previous page, but i think i can give some advice (give to get and all that) Leaving apart all the fails related to can control, such as leaving space between the trhow and the powerline/aura/howyouwannacallit, all is absolutely irregular. Just look at the main bar of the E and you can see that in the upper part is much fatter than in the end, and the same happen with all the bars in the b (i know that bars arent so important in throwies, but still you have to keep some basic structure.) Besides, the purpose of the powerline/aura its to contrast, if you use almost the same color its hardly noticeable and it has no point. Anyway, powerlines and brights are to use in pieces, and maybe simples, but not in throwies because throwies are made to be painted fast. if you have time to make all of that, youll be able to make a simple instead. and also, shades are real wack, but i dont know if is a problem of the throw or you just couldnt make them as you wanted because of can control.
Bare its just not lookin good. Hit more books and practice can control. I've been givin crits to you guys for the last couple pages and got no crits on my shit. So if i've given you crits before, return the favor. Ezac is not mine.
Sake is kinda huge. just sayin [Broken External Image]:http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/mo-ssfp001.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/to-cst001.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/b080.jpg
its funny, cause i find a different name for that in every place. in my country (and i think in other parts of europe too) its called powerline by everyone, or just power... and here in bs ive read aura, forcefield... but well, as long as you understand what im talking about, its ok xD