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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. MERTAone

    MERTAone Senior Member

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    not sure at all how to post shit but heres some pages hopefully
     
  2. MERTAone

    MERTAone Senior Member

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    not sure to how post shit at all but heres some pages hopefully
     
  3. gumOnShoe

    gumOnShoe Elite Member

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  4. PREA672

    PREA672 Elite Member

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    taht TOFE throwie is dopeee.
     
  5. BoomSlang

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  6. nickstix

    nickstix Senior Member

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    Twyst- the flic in the middle has the most potential. the first one I couldnt really read untill I saw your others. On the last, dont connect the letters, and the twists are kind of odd on some spots...only really works on the T I guess. Stick with keyboard letters like in your second flic for now, dont overlap them so much.

    Tofe- the orange and yellow simple is looking alot better, try not to make your E bigger than the other letters. The throw in the same flic is good.
     
  7. aces

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    I think that they both look really nice but to me the E in the first one is weak and the S in the second one is weak so if you had the E from the second in the first as well and the S from the first in the second as well they it would be really well put together. Would love to see some sketches cleaned up!

    Gum - that's a sweet throwie it really flows and the letters play off eachother very well. Keep it up!

    Tofe - Your throwie in that last picture is really really clean I guess the only advice I could give you there would be to scoot the O a little to the left because it feels like it should have a gap between it and the T in that one. And you're handstyle is good too just don't like the halo they almost never do it for me.
     
  8. MDT

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  9. M3KA1!

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    buuump. Meko. we should date.
     
  10. idk401

    idk401 Senior Member

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    Kinda fucked up on everything.
     
  11. drums

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    blah double post
     
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  12. drums

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    first pages in blackbook

    i just got into writing and these are the first few sketches i've done

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    i know the drips suck on this, i'm gana try to do them more realistic next time
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    and that is my first non-simple bubble/block letter sketches so can anyone give me some crit on my letter structure, i'm not too happy with it but i figured i'd throw it up since i have it

    and seeing as my handstyle is literally non-existent (i suuuck) the backgrounds are kinda empty but whatever just working on structure i guess
     
  13. LeaksOne

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    build off that shiller one. not the fill though or the ridiculous drips. keep it simple like that one. but tweak your E
     
  14. drOping

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    I see the shiller having the most potential, try to clean it up a bit. I don't like how that E is so small on the Fate deal. I like the top part of the R on the last one. Keep em comin'
     
  15. drums

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    thanks for the crits, i'm workin on my background for a piece right now cuz its just flowing out of me lol. i need to learn handstyle so bad tho...
     
  16. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    then stop doing pieces and focus on your handy. its essential.
     
  17. drums

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    dbl post again
     
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  18. drums

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    not sure if this is the correct place to post this but i figured you guys might like peter griffin haha

    and you can see how bad my handy practice is going in the background :(
     
  19. gumOnShoe

    gumOnShoe Elite Member

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    Avoid using colors for now.
    Don't worry about the fancy shit just yet.
    Pencil.
     
  20. 2FNK?

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    Damn Meko, nice work.

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    I fucked up the coloring later on, so I'm just posting this.

    The S and U suck.
     
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