last 3 i have done have at em Xo) lol View attachment 575200 View attachment 575201 View attachment 575202
Twyst- the flic in the middle has the most potential. the first one I couldnt really read untill I saw your others. On the last, dont connect the letters, and the twists are kind of odd on some spots...only really works on the T I guess. Stick with keyboard letters like in your second flic for now, dont overlap them so much. Tofe- the orange and yellow simple is looking alot better, try not to make your E bigger than the other letters. The throw in the same flic is good.
I think that they both look really nice but to me the E in the first one is weak and the S in the second one is weak so if you had the E from the second in the first as well and the S from the first in the second as well they it would be really well put together. Would love to see some sketches cleaned up! Gum - that's a sweet throwie it really flows and the letters play off eachother very well. Keep it up! Tofe - Your throwie in that last picture is really really clean I guess the only advice I could give you there would be to scoot the O a little to the left because it feels like it should have a gap between it and the T in that one. And you're handstyle is good too just don't like the halo they almost never do it for me.
here goes... let me know if this is the wrong place... [Broken External Image]:http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/6381/mmddtt.jpg crits?
first pages in blackbook i just got into writing and these are the first few sketches i've done i know the drips suck on this, i'm gana try to do them more realistic next time and that is my first non-simple bubble/block letter sketches so can anyone give me some crit on my letter structure, i'm not too happy with it but i figured i'd throw it up since i have it and seeing as my handstyle is literally non-existent (i suuuck) the backgrounds are kinda empty but whatever just working on structure i guess
build off that shiller one. not the fill though or the ridiculous drips. keep it simple like that one. but tweak your E
I see the shiller having the most potential, try to clean it up a bit. I don't like how that E is so small on the Fate deal. I like the top part of the R on the last one. Keep em comin'
thanks for the crits, i'm workin on my background for a piece right now cuz its just flowing out of me lol. i need to learn handstyle so bad tho...
not sure if this is the correct place to post this but i figured you guys might like peter griffin haha and you can see how bad my handy practice is going in the background
Damn Meko, nice work. View attachment 575588 I fucked up the coloring later on, so I'm just posting this. The S and U suck.