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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Meph*

    Meph* Guest

    Meka1!- i like your letters and you tags, keep it up the only thing id say is the M on the yellow piece looks more like an N instead, maybe try and fix that.

    Drums- the first peter and stewy came out wack but the second one is almost i dentical to the cartoon, keep at it

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    havnt posted in a while, got busy did this last week please crit, let me know if its creative or just weird..
     
  2. DieHippie

    DieHippie Senior Member

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  3. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    just the S and U? no sir. scrap the entire thing. make smooth lines not random jagged ones
     
  4. MDT

    MDT New Member

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    my shit obviously not worth commentin on...
     
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  6. Sbal

    Sbal Elite Member

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    D looks like an O, or even an A at an angle... Work on straight keyboard letters before putting all those kinks in. No hate, but that's a lame fill, shoulda left it empty or went with a solid color. The D in your tag is to small in the hole but the legs go back over the M too far. Give crits to get them next time. Also, is MDT a crew or your initials? What's that all about.
     
  7. Get Rekt!

    Get Rekt! Senior Member

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  9. M3KA1!

    M3KA1! Elite Member

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    Nah bruh that's Mekos werk. not mine. nonetheless very sexual
     
  10. mfatik88

    mfatik88 New Member

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  11. iamBoZ96

    iamBoZ96 Senior Member

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    sum colorz would look dope on the bottom peice
     
  12. Loki X Sho

    Loki X Sho Banned

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    blahhhh blah blah

    Rasn, the second one is lookin spiffy
     
  13. GuyGuyer of Guyland

    GuyGuyer of Guyland Senior Member

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    less extensions an thicken up the body for now. get rid of those arrow things on the bottom of your letters and bring the bars of the letters down more
     
  14. NosE2

    NosE2 Elite Member

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    i don't know if it's just me mfatik, but it looks like you bit the bottom one dude. you see the style in the one at the top then the one at the bottom? completely progressed and different. maybe not though. loki, diggin the fill.
     
  15. Loki X Sho

    Loki X Sho Banned

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    in other words....conform to lame graff standards....Nahhhhhhh.
    I like my weirdo extensions..without them it looks too normal.

    and thanks nose...its mostly watercolor.
     
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  17. GuyGuyer of Guyland

    GuyGuyer of Guyland Senior Member

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    im just throwin in my 2 cents. but i feel more work could be put into the letters
     
  18. Baron

    Baron Moderator

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    This. You need more structure.
     
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