wwillis try to fix that shaky hand and when u kinda mess up go over it again to make the lines smoother sake try making the E more spaced out instead of it being nehind the k i like everything except for the last 2 letters crits?
hey stigma that sketch is pretty cool but heres my 2cents... 1. i dont really like that effect that covers all those parts of your letters 2. it definitely needs color maybe adding it to the effect or letters would change my mind about liking the effect. 3. it would look a lot cooler and flow more if you made all the ends of the letters flow at the same direction if you know what i mean? like the left leg of the R, the left leg of the M, the bottom of the I, the bottom right leg of the K. idk if you understand me but make them all go to like one point instead of the left leg of the R going completely sideways and the right leg of the K going twords the bottom middle of the page. 4. im not feelin the middle part of the M idk try somethin different. But idk thats my opinion but ur bubbles drips and 3d look great man keep it up
i'm gonna be the one to call this one? OhSnap bite A and P forsure, the attempt at his colouring style is a giveaway
Sake: Looks rly cool, but i don't like the extensions on the top S n E, idk myb they're little 2 long? Or changing the directions and position of one o them? Just doesn't flow for me... I like the bottom one, dough. Stigma: I like the letters, just myb crowded bit? Myb loosing some of the effects? Crits? Besides the horrible pen control
hey guys havent p[osted shit in a il min so this is wut i got backe up in my books alot of poop but crits would be nice View attachment 578623 View attachment 578624 View attachment 578625 View attachment 578626 View attachment 578627 View attachment 578628 View attachment 578629 View attachment 578630 View attachment 578631 View attachment 578632 View attachment 578633 and no i didnt set them blunt raps up liek that i juss whent threw and to picks of every page in my book
How the fuck are you gonna call a bite on that shit? It's a god damn straight letter. Fucking retard... Everyone in here has to do SIMPLES.
If I was trying to color a piece like oh snap, there would be about 10 more colors. As far as the lettering, it's basic two or three bar structure with some very light extensions, not exactly a style you can pinpoint to one person.... But whatever, if you want to call it a bite, I really don't care. It's a piece I'm probably not going to develop anyway, so it ends with that sketch.
Sake work on simps Prea, i think the P is too small in comparison to the R and i dont like that right extension from the A, but it looks pretty good
im trying to find a new name. Royal just doesnt work for me. I was thinking of rote. My best letters are a,r,e,o so im trying to think of names with those letterrs any suggestions?
its looking like a whole new batch of toys. people learn straight letters, lose the random bends and twist and learn the basics. ARROWS ARE BADDD!!!!
Sick-not feeling the middle of the W, Like that R tho Some Green simps for your eyeballzz [Broken External Image]:http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/2084/1003232i.jpg
thx man yeah ill work on some of the stuff and it was a sketch battle so we couldnt use color but next time i will and yeah i fixed it one spot wit white paint marker bad i know haha