Stigma: love the e on your kevin, and both look sweet to me, To bladdered to finish colouring coz my team won, but any ideas on colours for the rest of this? Tried to cut down on the cracks as per leaks advise, so filled it up with randomness to see what fits best,
dangeri- you support liverpool? you dont need to make the e look the same as the a. if both letters were capital it would look way better
Yeah man, tis wer am from, we shoulda won by 6! an I have been tryna make em a little different by dropping the a off to the left middle, but I'll go with caps next time around an see wer that takes me, cheers. Wer bouts in n Ireland u from?
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anti - it looks like one of those ink blotches that the psychiatrist will ask you "and what does this remind you of" Lose the arrows, give your letters some structure (lose all those connections) Looking at the letters it seems like they might have some style if you drew them out using bars instead of melted wax. Can we maybe see those letters drawn out individually? or at least simple like? awe - for colors maybe a yellow/yellow fill, or a lighter orange/yellow. I like the piercings on the W. I dont like how you made the hole on the e look like a j, you should have made the hole in the a an actual hole if you are gonna make the e an actual hole Chad - Nice work, i like the D the most Stigma - the Jason is way better, I dont like the S though, its too square. You have a rounded J and O (even your A and N are slightly round), and your 3D is off on the N
U a Rangers man RES4? Dangeri - Im a liverpool fan too. I like the idea of your piece, i'd concentrate more on the individual letters because i like the whole broken/cracked idea and the 3d looks good, so i'd just concentrate on making the letters right, just my opinon though.
U a Rangers man RES4? Dangeri - Im a liverpool fan too. I like the idea of your piece, i'd concentrate more on the individual letters because i like the whole broken/cracked idea and the 3d looks good, so i'd just concentrate on making the letters right, just my opinon though.
Can i get crits on my letters on these? I dont need crits on my outlines or my colours because I know I fucked up on those. [Broken External Image]:http://s815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/?action=view¤t=DSC00288.jpg
The R is hot. Make the part that connects the two downward lines in the H skinny to match the skinny line in the R. The E just looks out of place and bad. It needs to be much thicker except you could make the middle straight left to right skinny to keep the theme going. The k looks good except for the line that is like / Make that one thicker and leave the rest the same. I know thats a lot of crits but I do like it.
you draw really slow. and the E is entirely too skinny. and i dont really like your R. but thats just me
Willis, almost every letter needs work bud. Bar thickness is all over the place Lose the extension on the w and just concentrate on making your letter bars the same width. Should even drop the 3d to be honest unitl you sort your structure out a bit .
Rhek, not really feeling that one. I think the bottom of the R and K need some work, seems too fat to me. [Broken External Image]:http://a.imageshack.us/img130/8303/scan0002ce.jpg There is a bright orange outline around the whole thing but it didnt show up on the scan, any crits? Uploaded with ImageShack.us
your stuff consistently looks better chad, only thing i would change on that is the lower part of the h bud. for some reason that seems out of place to me