Meko pretty good except the white one, turned me right off lol Slek nice but I despise the E on the second one man and the throw would be much better off w/out the teeth mang I got a better pic, opposed to the earlier one but ya boom, please focus on the letters not so much the fact that I went crazy with my markers! View attachment 585144 And meka I think it was, there's a huge debate of who belongs in which thread so we post in the bottom two lol to be sure/get more crits
here's just a simp I through together during class with a little bit of my own creation to it. crit please?
go ahead call my bite. i was bored of doing throws and tags so I attempted doing something a little more complicated but I was definetly inspired by alot of other pieces. View attachment 585200
^^ Scam Id like to see you get better so having just two random arrows in there makes it look like shit, (take out the arrows) Also make your S bars the same width and length that one long string is ugly make your S not stand so tall over all of them, Shorten it a bit, i know you said you were tired of simp's but stick with some simples for a while, + also you said "Call my Bite" Doubt anyone was gonna say you bit from someone else's your shoved your self out into the open by saying you bit.
Dropping I think what you could do is,connect the "K" to the "E" at the top where the extension comes off of the "e" and lose the extension on the "K" that connects the vertical bar to the arm bar kinda makes it look like an "R" if you get me also lose the connection from the "E" to the "K"...I was gonna draw it but you can probably get what I'm going on about. hope that helps
Thanks I get what ur sayin...I feel that extention on the top of the K ruined it, I think Im gonna rework that whole thing...to much homework right now tho.
Meko - your shit is amazing, really liking it, keep it up. Tofe - That arrow in the T comes form nowhere, not one of your best. Slek - Apart from the arrow at the top of the S on your 3rd piece I think its great. Smokers187 - That piece is the bomb, I like the whole thing. Scam - Really like this, maybe make the middle of the S a bit thicker. This is my first piece in a while [/IMG]
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Good job Willis, looks better then your other stuff. I think if the wil are going to be connected at the bottom, then the s should connect with it too, instead of going behind the l. Also work on the bars in the W. Spade, you're good at art, but you have a very wack tag. I'm going to say try to simplify your letters a little, cause those could be dope pieces if they were more controlled. Those characters are insane though, good job.
Thanks for the crit Sbal Spade, like the characters, cant really read any of the letters though, but if your that good at art then it shouldnt be too difficult for you. just finished this piece
wils- I'm not that good at giving crit but i'll try. I love the 3d, i think the bottom part of the W should be thicker? It might be your style but idk.