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somethin like that i take it..?

 

ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....

:lol:..

u need letter structure

 

You should really lose that arrow connection on your "A" and possibly make your letter the same size or similar unless that's what you were aiming for. I also think you could lose the extra tail branching off your "S" and bring the tail of your "R" out more and do a little more with your "E" by giving it more room to branch out.
I can try and help, but it won't work because you're a lot better than I am.

 

ATX.. if you can match all the letters with the style of that E.. it would be some good shit

 

Now that i know what it says, you should try practising/developing a handstyle instead of just handwriting. You should lose the arrow on your "M"and have all your letters touch instead of having two connections, then a gap, back to a connection. I suggest tyring to write in all capitals or mix them with some lower-case letters. Nonetheless, keep practising.

 

Yeah, I would say the same thing basically what wreck did demented. I would also say look around at pictures and stuff and other handstyles. It helps you develope yours and make em flow and look sexy.

 

thanx for the help, ill get practicing

 

bump any comments

 

when i need a laugh i come here and look at the skeches.

 

^^^ you're cool

 

runci, not bad at all/ lets see that shit all colored up.
nice style.

 

hey thanks man ive got a coloured one on my pc ill jus upload it n post it...
i usually fuk it up wen i color it..

 

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ill color the other 1 later...
wot u fink??

 

Heres some stuff. I hate the M on the top left one and i hate the tags and that squiggly thing on the right. Eh, whatever...

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Feedback!!

 

i like those venom,the last ones bad ass too.

 

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i bit some but not as much as it looks.i didnt really bite actually i just looked at this one dudes s and turned it to an a then then from the a i looked at it and made the s.what do ya'll think?

 

the S is the only good letter

 

Dude, what have you been doing for the last year. you've been on this site for about a year, and thats what you have came up with. START SIMPLE. Cerial Box simple, the poison under your kitchen sink simple, Dont throw some down and then add style when you have a shitty letter structure. It's going to take your a while to progress yourself. Get your letters down first. I'm not trying to sound harsh, but what your doing now isn't going to get your anywhere. Try something nice and simple, and post it when your finished..

 

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just seein whats better... feed.