ok where to start with the 3D you really shoulda put the lines connecting corners to the bottom, rather than having it all solid pale purple... it has no definition at the moment a keyline always helps pieces pop like crazy, maybe in this case i would have used that same pink that you used for the bits in the fill again, highlights help pieces pop like crazy. you'd be surprised how much of a difference they make, its worth the extra effort. the top part of the S doesn't line up at all, it goes from thin to thick for no reason. think thats all for now, just trying to give you a bunch of helpful crits.
heres some of my shit. its really bad, but whatever here goes http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...1483760062374_1485031718_1218489_685772_n.jpg http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...530534511706_1485031718_1336524_4107957_n.jpg http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...542507131014_1485031718_1372845_3632696_n.jpg http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...570293745662_1485031718_1454161_4282128_n.jpg http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...494891540654_1485031718_1247425_2186303_n.jpg http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos..._1378393948287_1485031718_976235_622517_n.jpg http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...1361606728617_1485031718_941202_5739378_n.jpg
Mase :: like y letters but I'd work on your 3d and defo go with a forcefield Freestyle in the local shop, think I like these s's better than my normal ones, crits plz
Mase- looks good but yea get the lines goin in the 3d Snot- looks dope but the 3d could be a bit cleaner heres my throwies... [Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/7373/img0231wo.jpg Uploaded with ImageShack.us [Broken External Image]:http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/7094/img0234fb.jpg Uploaded with ImageShack.us
3mpolak- try hittin the black book for a bit and get ur shit to flow cause i just cant see it goin anywhere not to proud of this but w/e [Broken External Image]:http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/5416/img0230s.jpg Uploaded with ImageShack.us
well thanks for looking over my shit. btw which one is the best out of those. and another question what is flow? i keep hearing people talking about how a pice does/ or doesn't have flow, but i hae n idea what it means. and i DO black book. a lot. about 90% of my graffiti is blackbook
@ MASE: Your letters have potential, but your A is covered by your M. And with the way the bar was set to run the bar on the A vanished. Pull that A out, and make it on it's own. Your letters have the potential for flavor, but they need to "Make love to each other." No homo. Your accents in your fill are nice, however clean up and cut the lines on the inside. It'll bang. Try and put more swing in that S. In turn, instead of dropping the line on that E straight down try to curve it to the right. So, it is close to the S.. but is all it's own. That random line coming up in the E on that middle bar.. cut or remove. Definitely drop a keyline on the outside. Even a fat ass outline would make this pop. The piece is right on the edge of a monster. Small attentions to detail would help this out, you're on point letter-wise in my opinion. @ Woony.. Yo man, if you're saying it looks like NEK.. Fix it man. And that picture, is shitty. I use dollar paint.. shit paint whatever. If you're using that, make it happen Cap'n. Feel me?
Cheers for the crits fellas, totally agree, need to work on putting somthing in my 3d,mite make me pay attention to detail a bit more. And the background was jus random cans I had, I normally go for a black n bronze background with the green letters but .. had a load half blues,
his letters r shit.... and i uno what he did on the three d, puttin lines in half of it then not touching n e thing else. its clean though, kinda
Cheers for the input stuck, but I generally only take crits from people that are worth atleast half a wank... Personally, I'd rarther shit on my own head than make my graff look even an inch closer to your generic 'imtryingtoohardwithmywackextentions' look. Cheers tho