I agree with it

 

does-nice slaps
soar-not feelin your a try it lowercase
mone- think the m is good if you try something different with the left side of it
mesk- not feelin the m but you do have a good idea going with the letters coming to a point at the top.. the second 1 your e looks more like an a to me also.

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You're not really about to write Does, are you?

 

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crits? advice? anything? lol

 

Was going to until I realized it was taken. :/

 

Revised a bit messy, 's' is also a little thick. More crit?

does-not feelin the bottom bubble on the 'd' or the little rectangle you have on the upper right of the 's'. Also too scrunched feeling for me.
soar- I agree with whoever above, try a lower case 'a' for grins. Maybe try adding a visilble leg for the 'A'?
mone- I like, left leg of the 'm' doesnt flow though. Also something looks to me funky about the right leg of the 'n'. Likin the 'e'.
hipe- 'pe' looks nice, 'hi' not as much. Try finding another why to depict the horizontal bar in the 'h'. The 'i' is just too boring but I can see how it'd be hard to get that to flow well.
anonymous - try rounding the bottom point of the 'd'? Looks fine as is though, consider doing more letters? And just missed a shadow on left side of the second 'd'.

 

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i think its improved from the last style, crits and advice?

 

the d in you previous post was more original, and r is just too big and looks akward. make them the same size or closer to it.

the second throw in your above post is better.

 

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DR, those green ones are heaps better than the B&W one.

 

Hipe i'm likin the letters a ton more, the 'i' in the painted throw is the best 'i' i've seen from you imo. Work on your 3d/drop shadow though and stay consistent with it, some of those have a combination and it looks weird, and some of the 3d is off in places.

 

wow i must be style blind haha.. i asked a few friends aswell they all said them.. i really liked that black and white one haha ah well..

 

yea i've been tryin to make my letters more legit focusing on that rather than my 3d

 

obviously still need a shit ton of work but am i gettin off to the right foot at least? workin on writin it quick n smoothly.

 

^ lines are clean, but theres no style except for your s, just looks like blobs shaped into letters

 

ribcage - nice structure

slip - first one is dope. wouldnt mind seeing the S tweaked a bit tho

 

^cant read it very, well throw or tag

 

You like that "h" don't you

 

re up for crits ..
mogan im tryin to tweak your h into my own guess im bitin for now its ok im a toy lol