Hipe it gets bigger as you move right, and most simple faces are played out at this point. I also think you need to give the letters in the first one some more space. Much better now than when you first started writing thoug. Cirts??
sbal the s looks like a regular s with 3d on it pull the e out a lil more and the b looks more like an 8 than a b [Broken External Image]:http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/1293934101.jpg
Peso don't do those faces in the O... they look really wack lol... But you are on the right foot for the most part
Any of you guys want to exchange? I got bored. Cooked Hipe up a throw with a pair of hands. [Broken External Image]:http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo167-1.jpg
Quick bullshit. I noticed that the E on the second one is smaller than the rest of the letters. Eh, you get the point. [Broken External Image]:http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo171.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo170-1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo172.jpg
Ok, I guess I went a little overkill on the throws. Lol, thing is, they're all the same, except I changed a few things on them. Hopefully no one will notice. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! [Broken External Image]:http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo174.jpg
the S is okay, obviosly your new, so dont get to crazy with style, but try to make each letter have its own defining characteristic that all flow together,