Bottom page bump

 

fix the bottom half of your S, and make the H wider. CLA looks good though

 

new style im going with on the exchange.

 

Heads up I just took up a 4 letter word once to feel it out. chill the hell out. I don't go by sane I just figured hey I don't use those letters often. So if someone happened to have a similar idea awhile ago I really don't give a shit. And again the shit took me like 5 minutes so ease up just figured I'd work on my lettering and hopefully get some crits since my last crit said my work was nearly elligible. But sure thanks for overlooking the idea completely simply becasue the letters have been used before.

 

http://www.google.com/images?client...&source=og&sa=N&hl=en&tab=wi&biw=1440&bih=705

lolol

learn some graff history bro

 

lookin better with each revision, i think yer L looks more like a W tho bud

 

zewl,lose some of those extensions and add ons.you got alot of them and it takes away from the actual letters,the L should be elongated becasue its leg is kinda long and it makes it look a bit like a w.i would lose the arrow hearts on the w too.but thats me.


all in all its not bad,it just seems jumbled.you look like your using too many add ons to cover up negative space,you should try different spacing and a thicker 3d.that will make the negative space less noticable.

 

can i get some crits plzz

 

thanks for the crits dudes.....i left that piece at my girls house, but i might find time to draw up a new one

 

also the addons are weak


what do you guy's think

 

What is the 3d on the first one?! haha

 

there is no 3d those are my weak addons

 

Thought the first one said Clash for a second. I was gunna be a pissed nugga. lol

 

pissed about what? someone writing your name that has been used and abused by hundreds of writers over the years? clash is super unoriginal dude.trust me on that.dont be suprised to see someone else with it in the near future,you will meet tons more than likely.


just throwin that out thereeeeeeeeskgjflkgjalkgfaflkjalknja.b./

 

i didnt put this was in the intermediate thread just cuz i fucked up so much
not final either i got the final exchange bein worked on now

 

It was a joke doood

 

leash- try to keep your letters the same size unless its gonna be a theme of the piece. Try to maintain balance in the piece, but looking good.

menace- I like that style, looks dope. only thing is i don't see a point of origin on the arrow on the right of the word. If you're gonna use an arrow or connect something, its always a good idea to not have it come out of nowhere.

Ive been out of the game for a while, havent been sketchin or posting in this side of the forum in some time, heres something i was workin on earlier.

 

dont worry,i was just bustin your balls haha.

 

This is my first real attempt at doing my tag. I'd love some criticism and suggestions as to how to make it look better. I really want it perfected before I can hit the streets.