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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Jigsaw

    Jigsaw Member

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    @gats nice simps
    @shut go simpler for awhile but u have got alot of potential
    @issac yeah man back to the keyboard for you
    and heres mine guys i was ina hurry so somthings are off but itll do prob. gonna go paint this soon so ill have the flick for yall!
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  2. FuckTheFame

    FuckTheFame Elite Member

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    gast is a beast...just gonna say it
    jigsaw - nicely done on filling that in. lets see more man. a piece without chars would be refreshing
     
  3. Female

    Female Senior Member

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    ai52.tinypic.com_a08nc1.gif
    Im gonna redo that one, cause i couldnt fit the E and where should the leg of the R come out.
     
  4. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    @jigsaw first 2 letters are steezy, not diggin the last two, on the E i dont like that tongue thingy you put on it, and it looks like u through that N on there without takin the time to make 1 match... looks like a throw N to me. also not a fan of the shadow color change

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    ^i managed to fuck simple ass 3d up
     
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  5. chiefy

    chiefy Senior Member

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    ignore top one
    ribcage- you should keep it allone color it would look nicer
     
  6. ViniVidiVici

    ViniVidiVici Senior Member

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    That S is in so much pain I hurt for him....
     
  7. ViniVidiVici

    ViniVidiVici Senior Member

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    I'm just gonna say everyone on this page besides MEWN and REACH use bars and don't post your pics if your not gonna even attempt to make your bars good.
     
  8. thepekins

    thepekins Guest

    please tell me that was sarcasm. . . please.


    @vinividivici - you said it man, this page got no bars
     
  9. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    wish y'all was wrong bout that. lol
     
  10. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    then again fortunately your not.
     
  11. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    ^did that really take 2 posts to say? I realize that this post is just as pointless, but fuck, 2 posts for something that is not constructive to the thread at all in a row 1 minute after eachother?! damn *****
     
  12. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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    Can I get some crits?
     
  13. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    lol my bad! didn't know it would get your panties
     
  14. Tempo718

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  15. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    having trouble getting a consistent width
     

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  16. ViniVidiVici

    ViniVidiVici Senior Member

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    Okay Tempo, when you do your bars don't just try to draw two straight lines and connect them, sketch the bars and then end it however you want.
     
  17. ViniVidiVici

    ViniVidiVici Senior Member

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    Gatsoi - The First one I like but the E W overlap is sloppy looking I think don't do it. The second one don't do eyes and E looks a little strange and breaks the flow, fix that and it'll look nice. The third one the bars are a little shaky in areas on the M, some other bars are a little questionable.... The fourth and fifth are dope, and I really like the green/white/black one, but get rid of the eyes, I think it would make it look better.
     
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  18. Jigsaw

    Jigsaw Member

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    wat about this s critts
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  19. Dcicfhbimv

    Dcicfhbimv Senior Member

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    Messing around while waiting for some food at a hibachi joint. Crits?
    Tempo- try using a pencil it allows you to erase. I know its obvious but still it helps you adjust your work without making another piece altogether. and also no offense but I'm sick of seeing the same thing posted over and over again. Oh and pencil can help you out with shading. Try cross hatching by the way the technique works wonders.
    Jigsaw- does it say TS? i kinda like it I'd lose the bits though the look forced. And the initial wave line on the end of the "T" goes in a different direction than the "S" so it feels like it obstructs the flow of the piece. But thats just me hope it helped.
     

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  20. Jigsaw

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    go more simpler u have potential just need work on letter structer