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stainer throws

 

i like that P but that H looks wack and take the bottom what ever that i off and your good

 

I still dislike the points on the bottom of your throws, but you seem to like them, so I'll quit calling you on it. And the skinny bit on the left of your P throws me off a bit.

I need to fatten the K a little bit.

 

really? should i go with just a rounded bottom without the spikes? i think that's actually the thing that's gives my throw some identity imo, if i just simply round it up it'll be too bland donno.. but i'll give it a shot
and yo that thing on the P ure talking about ibu is the back bar of the P, throws have structure too innit...
thanks for the crits

 

^ yo i agree wit nouv, i dislike them spikes you put on it too

@nouv looks like your steppin out of your throwie style a little bit, i dig it, except for the bottom left part of that K...I can imagine what you meant for it to look like tho, so as for crits that A needs more style, only letter thats just a blob

 

i disagree, yo'. i fucks wit' dat pointy shit mah' *****.

now fo' mah' jazzzzzzzz; an exchange.

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okay i've always been shit at throwies but i have decided put on up here. please gimme some crits

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not round but drip the spikes adn the P its the bottom that i dont like

 

kawt start by making the space between letters consistent. Having gaps on only one side of the word makes it look uneven. Also that W irritates me because the center line doesn't line up.

Crits? I know I forgot the drop shadow on part of the bottom one. Didn't notice 'til it was too late.

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^^word, plus giving info such as "at a sandwich shop, my job, my college" is more than enough to pin point who the fuck did them if they are reported and you get unlucky enough to have a cop from your town lurking BS. jail food es no bueno.

 

work on paper before you begin vandalizing your work and school

 

Working on my throwie...

 

Thanks for all of the feedback guys. I deleted the post for safety and lack of quality. I'll get a blackbook and work on it. Any crit of my work that you all remember that would help in the quality aspect?

 

chen, that last one is dope. the colours really work with it

 

I'd have to agree, the bottom one looks dope.

Blah.

 

Lol this is true, only thing to look forward to is getting a piece of fruit thats not beat to shit

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Okay, I practiced on paper. Crit this for me, yeah?

 

None of those are throwies.