Used to write in hs, started getting back into it, just fucking around. Here's my new name I'm running by. Sarin as in Sarin Gas.
i already posted this on the pictures forum but Imma post it here as well due to the fact that i need to get the maximum amount of opinions on this, its important [Broken External Image]:https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.ne...932152957_100000507545549_772763_479168_n.jpg I need loads and loads of opinions on this please it's a book cover it's supposed to be printed on matte paper, with the grey parts actually laminated over the black background. not printed. please, go ahead and bomb me with comments. thanks in advance
I like the Phat quickwrite but think the writers bible needs to be the focus and should be a bit more legible like Phat 2 is. Dope though.
Phat... You may like your handstyles... but most other writers don't.. Sorry. I would take one look at that book and be like "a toy wrote this" and move on.
[Broken External Image]:https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.ne...932152957_100000507545549_772763_479168_n.jpg move the "the" to the right, and the "bible" to the left so everythings centered... change that W in writers and that E in bible... and the line coming out the bottom of the V in Vol... other than that i like the phat2 tag... and to be honest youve been progressing more than anyone else ive been watching on here so props, i still lurk so i know whats up lol oh and aserdoe those phillys look like shit, come stab me if u mad........ constructively, id say chill out a little, philly tags arent really meant to be legible i know but that doesnt even look like u were attempting letters at all... and dont use light colors on light walls, if that second one was black i think itd be pretty dope... but again, fuck that first pic
y would the tooth fairy go bankrupt if you knocked out all of our teeth? wouldnt that be good for him/her?
@rask R and K both look like they have M's comin out of em, nahmean? @aser blue 1 looks like its aight, first 1 is garbo in my opinion... looks like a little kid did that shit
"most" other writers ? ure the first person to give me full negative feedback on it so no, apparently, "most" other writers think its good, and I personally dont have a fixed opinion on my handstyle, I always see room to improve, that's why I come here and ask for your opinions. but for the moment being, and regarding the fact that this is for '09... my hand is as good as it get at this moment now but still, thanks and resepct to zookyook man. long time no see
Wow. You need to work on your Phillies, bro. It ain't all about it being illegible. You actually have to have a basic concept of how your letters should be constructed. Then you start to squeeze 'em at the top and bottoms, get the slight bend depening on which hand you write with, and then add loops.
Letter excercise. [Broken External Image]:http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo141-1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo160-1.jpg
ibpro-love your R's keep em up, and not shure, but the line between the L and A in first pic seems out of place, not shure if its part of the L or A crits please, been a while since i been on here, been working on style throw ended up there somehow, sorry