Just screwing around. Lets just call it practice. Tasty-Idk how to critic yuor style since its really different than anything I've seen but as far as it goes the overlap on the 1st pic really hides the 2nd letter. Cobra-The sideways letter thing isn't working there. Like at all I had a really isse figuring out that that was an "A" it is an "A" right? it reads AEnt? Or AMnt? not trying to be a dick but can you see what I'm saying? Subconscious- I like it seems old school though the esa on the end seems really crammed and Im not a huge fan of all the bits there on virtually every letter . the fill on the 3d is pretty cool though. Jdub- don't know what to say. Sorry broski tired as fuck I owe you a crit.
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Hate to bitch but seriously Crits for crits guys. If you want someone to crit your shit crit someone elses shit. CentuarySam-2nd one down-H looks like a K wit ha sideways A attatched to it. THe fills are interesting like the pastel look.sorta reminds me of easter eggs Spire-the 1st two all the letters look virtually the same no joke.the other two need some work try bars . Flat- the extension on the L looks wonky and unneccesary same with the one on the T. I know the one on the T is supposed to be behind but without coloring it loos like an E. The A is pretty sweet though. Maybe you guys could do me a solid now and crit my little scribble THANKS!
@Flat looks pretty wack, all those little arrow extensions you put coming out of nowhere look real stupid, the only letter that doesnt have them is the A, which is the only decent letter you got there. Middle horizontal of F is crooked. Work on making your bar width consistent like on the bottom right bar of A, and your T is your F except even worse... cheers @dchiv I critted yours b4 but i didnt have pic so it got deleted i think... but uh id say go more simple and not as much conceptual ya digg? make your letters do the talking and not an idea. As for your letters, id say start by squaring off all your corners instead of making random sharp ones like on your I, and on the top right of the T. Then define your letters, those ones are straight except for the last, cant tell if its an H or N uuuuuuuuuhhhh need a pic i guess so ima bump this old ass unfinished peice of shit, by no means finished... prolly ink it soon tho so be quick if you got ideas fo it View attachment 604381
JDub- Piece is pretty nice but i think you should work a little bit on your R, and color that money bagg. lol Dchiv- I actually like it bro, its something different which is good. Like ricage said tho the last letter is kinda hard to tell what it is, and work on that "I" too. But overall if u keep workin with that style i think it will look nicee. Humr- The only one i like is the second piecee, and your throws are pretty nicee. You need to even out your bar widths in some places and take more time with your lines and make em clear. FLAT- A is hot but IMO the rest isnt so good. Ribcage- I like it, but i dont like the R. The top of it looks wierd. But nonetheless i think you should ink and color that bitch. lol Well i think ive done enough critting, lol any crits for my exchange with WILBUR?
^^the u looks kinda funky needs work, the cuts above the w look misplaced and the drips could be straighter but i like the style
View attachment 604407 sorry this took so damn long soar. it sucks ill probably end up doing another one sometime
Swlost - I agree with jdub but make the part of the A a bit fatter and do something to the end of the V it just kinda dies Chronic - It might just be the picture but the date and some of the other letters should be cleaned up IMO but other than that it looks pretty sweet Kweezy - Make the 3D closer to the same length and angle. Maybe make the black part a little thinner. Nice piece tho, really clean Here's some of mine DUBZ Yea I know I messed up the D that was just a quick one BRING IT ON ALESANA MIND