be careful with that lower case N, some of those looks like HAH, bottom left looks like BAH, top right looks like VAH
they all look like [Broken External Image]:http://poopbagel.webs.com/poop.jpg lol but there is lightweight improvement
[Broken External Image]:http://29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ljt69uFAEi1qce4eyo1_500.jpg Please give some crit, I'm all Toy, started yesterday lol.
I'm feeling it Enero. I like the 'ZONK' the best, but the 'K' might look a little off, can't quite put my finger on it. Feel free to crit mine
you know what music isn't such a bad idea @ sok tell you what, that flick isn't that bad, you could make some nice mini-bombs, mini-pieces with just one color, maybe an outline tops... but it's not what I'd consider a "handstyle"... if you're looking for something quick to tag around on every wall, then this took a lot more time than it should - EVEN if you're still toy look at any tag on the page except for zonk's for example. quick n easy is what you should go for when thinking of handstyles but I tell you again, this doesn't mean that what you did isn't ok. it's just not something you could use on the run... you can use this as your signature, the one you put under your pieces when you're not in a hurry (ex: chill spot, permission wall, blackbook..) it needs a few tweaks though
I appreciate the feedback so thanks in advance, I was wondering if the style I went with was suitable or not. Regardless, I can actually throw is up fairly quickly with a marker as long as i'm not fattening the lines and it looks ok at best. I like your idea of using it more as a sig for under a burner or something. Can you give me an idea of what 'tweaks' you were thinking? One thing I was wondering about was the size of my 'k' in relation to the 's'. should it be closer to the same size or am i going in the wrong direction? thx again bruv
Mav- Mak the "A" look more like an "A". Try making all the letters the same height. Possible name change.
This has nothing to do with me, I just thought it would serve to motivate some toys to keep practicing. I caught these old Demos and Difer tags the other day. Everyone has to start somewhere View attachment 604410 View attachment 604411 Heres what their tags look like now View attachment 604412 View attachment 604413 Edit: I would also like to make it clear why their tags got better. If you look at each letter, they each try less individually, and instead try to look better together. Hope that makes sense (also the demos isnt the best example, but search around and you can find real good ones.)
Alright guys, got some I've been trying out... let's hear some feedback plz! #1 aaand #2 [Broken External Image]:http://26.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ljx4t4XEU01qce4eyo1_500.jpg
use KEYBOARD LETTERS. I will do a tag below this that looks 10x better than either SOK Keep your letters the same size, get a new name, its impossible to fuck up keyboard letters, so thats the best way to not look foolish. If you had taken the time to read a page or two of this thread instead of posting that shit i wouldnt have to post this reply that doesnt include a picture.
Keyboard Letters...yes -_- I understand where you're coming from on keeping my letters proportional so I'll keep that in mind. However, I don't get what's wrong with my name? What about the letter style?
no i dont need to work on my "phillies bro" you come around here and my shit is considered dope who are you? just cause you cant read it dont mean my city cant. do your homework kid