word, its lighter in person so you can see it better but i gotchu

 

yup yup, and usually when i decide to put hash marks/lines/blocks of color in my 3d i make it a diiferent shade of the 3d color and I hardly ever use outline color for it unless its black and white... that 1 is more personal preference though

 

yeah dawg thats the first time i ever tried usin those

 

ian- 1st pic-drop some of the extensions, and dont bother connecting the letters (yet), other than that ts looking pre clean.
2nd pic-too many extension and bends in the letters... and imo it wouldve looked better with the I being seperate from the connection between the M and N... and the D is pre wack, sorry man
geth- your letters are leaning too far over, and shorten the top extension on the E and make the bottom extension on the G go farther.
dent- make your letter size more equal... your D and T need work, and your drop shadow is pre off.. but, your E and N are lookin pre good

new stuff, crits always appreciated

 

any crits on dis?...

ian - I notice an improvement in all your stuff, any painting recently?
tasty - why do we never see alot of color from you? otherwise bars have good consistent width.
dent - that is a good look, but is there any reason the n and t are smaller than the first 2 letters?
ewl - i'd say ur gettin a little better bit by bit but on this peice your t got too close to the h.

 

thanks... and ya i dont use colour because i wanted to get structure down... ill do a quick fill on some of those actually and re-post later

EDIT: im digging that tempo, my only complaint is the A doesnt look like an A and your L should be bigger... but keep it up

 

tasty i like ur shit for the soar i would put more spacing between the s and o as for the throws my fave is the far right
tempo yeah fix up the l and a good work dude

crits please.

 

the I is kind of hurting the flow, the PE flows really well together though, im feeling it.

 

yeah im seeing that now thanks bro

 

any constructive thoughts people? ...

@Mippi - I see why weed said the I throw it off cause it not as wide as the rest but reguardless that dont stand out bad enough to ruin what you got goin on. I think its dope.

 

Tempo pretty cool, try to just go straight with it tho,
nice mippi, but yah the i is a little small and bad cuts
soar, i like tha throw up

this a little shit i just did, effects came sloppy but its all cool

 

^^^ It says "Dope"

 

Hulk- alright like i said go simpler work on making it cleaner before you work on connections and style and Rask i like it, the 3D on the curved bar at the bottom of the A is a little bit off and i wud suggest trying to bring that arrow at the end of your piece a little bit tighter but keep it up it looks sick bro

 

tried 2 fix some of the drop shadow, still not how I want it to look though. oh well

 

I like it. Its a style im not used to seeing.

 

Thanks Tasty and Tempo for the crit. Yeah i was doing that kind of fast and didnt look at the letters before I inked it.. I usually put some sort of marker to tell me the height. Oh well haha

 

thanks for all the crits people, tasty i hate that D too, i really liked the MI and the N was alright and i agree the I shouldnt be connected. Also tempo i painted for the first time last week, sucked ass though. shitty wall, shitty paint, not even worth posting. hoping to get out more soon, its been raining like a bitch lately

 

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