this was for crits on my geezer leans work i fucked up my piece and decided to throwie over it

 

you using belton? ya boys lines are clean but his letters are wack

 

Prod with Taz, Lux, Rufes, and Basel

 

Quicky burner.

 

meh, at least you distinguished the letters in the last 2 of yours, the one towards the top of the page in blue ooks like FLLAL

 

so this time yo chose the words 1- "3LBE" and 2- "JLAO"
nice practice

 

tbh phat that extension off the P and A are pretty wack, along with the top part of the H

 

Flat, you suck at graffiti. Seriously. Learn some letter structure, flow, and learn where to put your god damned extensions. fuck.

 

truth about you, you've dropped alot of pieces, and most turn out like shit and are not very clean (your last one for example). I've only dropped about 10 pieces at max, and my lines/can control is alot better than your, my letters might not be the best, but atleast I can pull off whatever I'm doing, and make it clean, unlike whatever you drop most of the time, especially the last one you posted.

 

But do you see him using montana and what other quality paint u use?! I don't think so. You must be young for the other dudes you paint next to/with to not give you a heap of shit for letter structure. Or your not paintin with em just next to em... Them other dudes pieces you posted were dope, because they all got letter structure

oh yeah one more thing, looks like almost every wall you paint on is a chill spot/legal spot, that ***** phat be bombing, lets see a bomb from you where you dont have all the time in the world to make your lines clean

 

THIS^

you give phat some fuckin high quality paint and i guarantee he could put out something 10x better than the stuff you post man, i dont know why you even bother wasting time on these forums, you post the exact same shit over and over and dont listen to anyone when they try and help you out. Not only are your letters shit on their own, next to those other pieces, you're lookin like a complete toy in a town full of kings. why not just listen to what everyone has to say for once and get your shit together so you dont end up lookin like a fool

 

bump for crits

 

@Sense, those are dope, really digging your style.

 

the truth about this forum is its 95 percent bitches.... and 4 percent who write for a week.... and flat and phat.... both of you should not be talking shit. nuff said

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fills outlines highlights and such are on point and come off clean but your letters are pretty messed up. middle of the S is way to thin, sharp point on the bottom left of U and C and top left of S are weird and the hole in the K is a bit too big, just get your bars together and shit will be tight

 

your letter structure aint the greatest either your shit looked prety wild to me

 

yo hop off his cock bro lol dude shit rocks hard and i love every one is still on ths structure shit...really? yall must be writtin a damn text book with all the shit you guys know about graff.. like you guys should be legands and kings off the graff world... man i envy you guy sooooooooooooooo much! like omg totally! i dunno worry about paint and gettin your name up and stop tellin ppl how they do yeah give the ideas dont tell them how to do THIER style... yo flat your shit is your shit fucks these internet text book graffiti producer do you homie get your name up... and its funny half these ppl in the TOY threads are preachin about the dude that get up more then them? i dont get it i dunno stop bitchin and post flicks no one wants to see an ETHUG with a viagra induce boner ok

 

I'd like to see you pull off half my cleanliness with the shit I use - dollar cans (not even rusto or krylon) + stock caps
and yeah, I've dropped a lot of pieces since I started, but unlike you, I've progressed and my style gotten better and better within my first 10 pieces, and now a year or two later I'm STILL developping and improving by listening to the crits others give me. not by being a stubborn dick and sticking my own shit up my nose thinking I'm king.

you have the luxury of rolling with these good heads there, you could learn a lot and take their advice you know. if nothing else, you could cross the street and find about 5 pieces for inspiration. whereas I had to learn everything the hard way running solo for a year in a COUNTRY (not city or town) that has ONLY A HANDFUL of good writers, literally... less than 10, so u can imagine how rare it is to stumble upon a tag, or a throw let alone full blown burners to look at and get some inspiration.

face the music, for someone in your shoes, you're doing horrible, in graff and in attitude.
and I'm not even gonna talk about the chill spot vs bombing aspect that you and I differ in.

with all that said, a flick from a couple nights ago on the highway must be posted:

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that straight is tight