crits? besides the overall sloppiness, it was pitch black

 

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i wouldnt write jedi., throws alrite though, i just dont really feel the D, plus it seems small

 

brand new and messing around with concepts. quick sketch.

 

Very first time out with spray paint. Done on a bridge near my house. Tips, comments, and constructive criticism.

 

You need some work man. Stick to the black book and practice your can control.

an outline in MPLS.

 

nice hollow ace color and drop shadow next time

 

sweet throw ace. just needs to be better flowin. kinda looks a bit stiff know what i mean? but definitely a good starting point to build off of

 

Any crits?

 

Sane your throw would be way better if you moved the A slightly behind the S, lose the left bump on the N, and move it behind the A. Just my opinion though. Plus it'd be easier and quicker to fill. Are those painted throws just practice ones at your house or actually on the streets?

 

I just had a flashback looking at sane's e i use to rock that same 1 when I wrote hipe .. but yea what ace is sayin also just try simple bubble letters without extra lumps curves and points for now.

 

dont write SANE yo

 

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you can't write sane, he's a legend.

and I wouldn't write ERASE either, especially since you're from the bay; there's already an ERASE in sfo.

 

nice nose hand is crack too

 

This is the only thing that should be said to someone trying to write Sane in this thread

 

but he has it stiched on his hat bro!!

 

Thanks ace uhmm ye I'll try that out and those paint ones were in my house but I'm going to do Agee out soon

 

second sticker in this pic.. first was a shitty char attempt.. any advice on the throw?