The entire last page is dedicated to mcsatan... you can't possibly need that many crits for a throw.

 

lol I'll mix it up from Satan. I need some work on my S...

 

hmm i like the S but the second E i dont like it whit that tongue do it like the first E

And lol satan need many help.

 

well lawlcat considering i posted 5different throws,and i've never done a throw at least i'm working on it instead of bitching on the internet cause someone is filling a forum page

that being said

i eliminated the extension on the P and put in a lower case E instead couldn't quite get an uppercase to work, and again crits please

 

new throw I never got any crits on... what should I fix/improve?

 

McSatan...what the fuck. Sike I'm just playin... work on the e way more.
You see how this e looks? YOU CAN SEE THE LEFT SIDE OF IT. WORK ON THAT. And work on the center of your H a bit more.
And Seor make the bottom left bar of the R smaller, it makes the whole thing weird. Keep it the same size as the other leg of the R. If that's a 1 a the end, don't have the bottom bar become a circle and go into it. It would look better like ) that except on the bottom of it. And for your S, work on the bottom of it. It just doesn't look right, mostly the little space inside of it. I just don't feel it, turn it or bend it differently or something haha

 

throw up by sirduke!, on Flickr

3d is shit

 

yeah im not too reliable as far as crits go but hell the toy as fuck guy has to try helping out sometimes
emace1 that e is a bit fucked up, especially the left side of it and yout right the 3d is messed up but as far as i can see it all has to do with can control and taking your time

can i get some crits on this?

 

Try not to have your letters increase in size too much like that.

 

oh shit i didnt even notice i was doing that, thanks


any progression here? crits?

 

that ***** soup..thats tragic. someone take that paint can out of hellen kellers hand..please?

jest.. try taking thee swirly thing out of your e.. maybe an eye or a star or something, just play with it bro.

 

Much better Jest. Keep working with it. Work on a two letter throw as well.

 

hahahaha
yeah ill try something different will post it asap im working on a karak right now

 

Mace's throwie is fine just how it is.

 

His A confuses me a little bit. Not to fond of it myself, the rest is aight tho.

@MN Nice dude. work on your throw. stop worrying about these fools throw when yours is still garbage.
@atak shape of the left part of J and bottom part of E are just weird. and your T looks like a lower case r. LAst but not least dont put 3d over your letters. like the 3d on the E and S

 

Aight aight. What crits you got for it other than it being garbage?

 

E and C looke exacty the same. THe S is almost exactly the same except with the swirl in it... the shadow is bad too

 

I agree with rib on Mace's A, looks too goofy to me.
I don't see too much wrong with MN's throw, though.
It's really bland, but I've seen dudes with throws much worse getting props.

 

props dont mean theyre shits not wack. they get props cause it was painted im assuming, not because its on paper.