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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    no need to crit the top piece, but crits on the bottom piece will be appreciated
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  2. sadgeh

    sadgeh Senior Member

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    Peter - im from holland, its allready legalized. But your toppiece looking good, maybe some 3d on. The purple thing is nice, make the lines cleaner.
    Ewal - no crits, its simple, the 3d is nice with that colors.
     
  3. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Characters are from a 60s or 70s cartoon, Inki and the Minah Bird. Or something like that. Show was funny, the bird is fucking awesome.
     
  4. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    lucky basterd! I was thinking a one point perspective in the center would give a nice shape. That was my first attempt at painting.... I am still learning the brushes and such I need to thin out the paint a lot more. It was going on like cake icing.
     
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  5. pointman

    pointman Senior Member

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  6. shadyloc420

    shadyloc420 Member

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  7. arsebanditskaelsucker

    arsebanditskaelsucker Senior Member

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    peter- yeah i like all of that on this page :) especially the one above the painting
    Sadgeh-nice, you need some blending pens tho, think the twists are a bit too much but i do likes it
    s.o.l- nice but top of that is is a bit too short for my liking
    ewal- the 2nd one shape of the letters reminds me of like wild west style writing don't know why lol, liking the 3d on the 1st one if not the colour :)
    pointman- welcome hi, not seen you for a while lol :) goms now is it?? , only thing i dont like is the little kick off the top of the G, and m's a tiny bit porky..but i'm just being picky for no good reason ha
    here's a random one i've just done....... kinda had the joined up letters idea in my head and just went for it
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  8. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    It does have a wild west feel to it. A wood grain fill with nails would be sick if you can pull it off.
     
  9. aaesoo

    aaesoo Senior Member

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    another pen freestyle, because i dont own any colours atm.
     
  10. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Aeso thats looking fresh, if anything tilt the S and O just a tiny bit. To fit a LITTLE better with the A and the E.
     
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  11. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    forgot to fill in some of the 3D. whatever :p
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    sadgeh: fresh, keep that up.
    peter: that canvas is dope
    ewal: both are good, nice and simple, stick with that style.
    aeos: letter sizes are weird
    2lives: dont connect your letters
    aeso: thats good, but your handstyle is hurting bad.
     
  12. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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  13. .Cuore

    .Cuore Senior Member

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    really feelin it, although i also feel it might have been a bit better if you incorporated a capital E
     
  14. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    i use the stupid site uploader :p. doesnt work in pm's
     
  15. Beastizm

    Beastizm Banned

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  17. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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    widen up letters, drop that T, make the S less curvy, M is tight. make other letters similar to M
     
  18. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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  19. sadgeh

    sadgeh Senior Member

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    make your letters even big.
     
  20. centrysam

    centrysam Senior Member

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