oh ok, ive seen both the lizard and wizard guy a bunch of times, so its nice to finally know were they came from. thanks man MN Nice - there is to much negative space between the M and U and the E and S. also if u flipped the M it would look better crits please
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i like the a and m but I'm not sure about that e if thats what it is but yea the rest of the letters look good in my opinion
knoxln that A is banggging. As for the N, its pretty simple. But if you had those lines a little sharper i think it would look dope. Maybe try to encorporate a wave in one of the legs or somthing similar to what you did with the A Just my 2 cents, by no means am i "good" hah
yea bro i agree on the 'a' shit is fresh but the fat part coming off the middle of your 'e' is what looks wierd ,make that part skinnier to look like the rest of the letter
mn nice- dont flare the bars so much and bring those letters together. and that U is retarded. Ewal- thats gettin there. work on the E, its pretty weird. but if you fattened teh W a lil and lost the extension and made the horizontal bar on the L not a bubble it would look pretty dope. Knoxin- practice those M and N's you got, and it could turn to something good. but you gotta start over on that E. bored on an airplane... aha, hit me with usefull crits [Broken External Image]:http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/securedownload-4.jpg
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crits? Peter - like it more than the one before, lines can much cleaner and the handies are bad, but overall it looks good. Nice colours is it only paint or also markers or something
indeed the hadies are super bad... I was getting super lazy. I can paint over it and do it again. It's spray paint on canvas and the details are paint marker. My other one was brush with some pasty ass acrylic. I have a few others I am working on I'll post up soon. Thanks. As for you piece I like the direction you're going. I would drop the arrow on the bottom of the T and the way this flows I might make the o, r, e in a cursive fashion. The direction of the E looks promising to me but the execution needs some work keep working on it. It creates a big gap where the BS is. This is a close up of a really bad attempt to conveigh what I had in mind. I should have tilted the O and R to give it a little more cursive feel among otherthings. Keep it up.
@Beast> not a bad start. You're missing 3d on the top of the S, in the hole of the A, and the top of the K. Your 3d seems to change directions a bit too. Put a dot somewhere and use a ruler if you have to. Take your time with it and attention to detail. Keep it up.