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Diss The Person Above You-Freestyle Battle Cypher

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by trowel, Mar 4, 2008.

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  1. Fool

    Fool Member

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    You've beat your swords into words
    only to stab the establishment
    Anarchy runs rampant, hell bent
    I'm not a rapper
    I'm a poet
    Rhymes make the thread so beautiful, ribcage might as well close it
    I'm not a writer
    I'm an artist
    Paint over the worlds malign cyst
    Your obviously a well informed member of the community
    You couldn't spell pedestal right if it was your sole duty
    Your rhymes are all slop
    like you got conceived behind an IHop
    Put some real effort into it
    Instead of using the government as a catching mit
     
  2. Norfsuthr

    Norfsuthr Elite Member

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    Why so excited with yourself your bustin nuts?
    When most of us decided that your nothin much...
    Thats the hard truth, art of fact
    You're subpar youth, I'm an artifact
    Grown wise with the ages
    a spectacle like the rise of cicadas
    a class above like polos to gators
    on a level you'll never see like top secret data
    Me? I'm UFO fly keepin it fifty one
    you're a cockpit beneath my nifty pun
    Swallow my words or sleep with a gun

    liked the hellen/helen lines
     
  3. Riss

    Riss Elite Member

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    When proclaiming that you're a class above
    then obviously lyrics are needed to back it up
    otherwise the sky's the limit regarding lies
    so jump outta that Apollo or you're bound to die
    of fire inside just like the first of them
    when I casted a curse on them
    I steady keep having a thirst for M-
    C blood, drinking it with a hatter out of a teapot
    a hillbilly saw an unidentified flying fool when I grabbed and threw
    you by the neck all the way back to school
     
  4. Norfsuthr

    Norfsuthr Elite Member

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    lol nice ending, i'll back at you later
     
  5. the cannabis evangelist

    the cannabis evangelist Elite Member

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    i got a fat dick for ur wife to choke on,
    shes cookin me steak,
    cuss u cum quicker tha light photons,
    and cant move ur hips in the right motion,
     
  6. Fool

    Fool Member

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    (I have to agree with norf, your ending was pretty sick riss. But any way, here I go!)

    Man, your the penultimate
    You may want to sit
    Because I'm about to get philosophical
    Cyphers fresh like orbital
    The situations getting nebulous
    like secret Santa at a communist Christmas
    You only speak of pleasures of the skin
    Get mature, and debate with the real men
    He may not be able to move his hips
    but at least his mind can watch his lips
    How do you survive
    with your maturity so oxygen deprived
    Your obviously compensating for a small rap
    with an ego overflowing from the tap
    I hope you like to bleed lakes
    because my sharp retort just put glass shards in your steak
     
  7. jerm_haf

    jerm_haf Senior Member

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    Your names fool so i guess you know already
    that your verses are wack and your lines aint steady
    so let me step in a tear you up like freddy
    my words kill and commit crimes not petty
    your rhymes are more slanted than the eyes of Jet Li
    the pleasure of the skin is the pleasure you give on your knees
    your rhymes are so ugly i dont know what i seen
    the only thing you debate is math if you know what i mean
    your girl can move her hips
    and she do all on my dick
    and her minds watching her lips
    giving me head taking bong rips
    Ripping this verse ive done indeed
    Im surviving just fine dont impeed
    swag overflowing down to your feet
    keep your steak and eat my meat
     
  8. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    Your names jerm haf cause your mind is half a jerm
    sittin w/ your comp writing rhymes in a bath of sperm
    On the other side is me just smoking my shurm,
    but the times quickly ticking so I guess its my turn,
    -to teach you, like paper covers rock I always beat you
    Like scissors cut paper, Ill find ya girl and rape her
    and like scissor got smashed by rock, I smashed her with my cock
     
  9. Riss

    Riss Elite Member

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    I stand tall in the bombingscience crowd of mental midgets
    your communication is primitive like binary digits
    ribcage playing papes, rocks and scissors
    I'll scissor off your fingers and always win hah
    and just like Linda - Lovelace you took your mouth too full
    talking shit like a fool
    word is born, I'm popping a bottle of champaign
    stripping you like the russian electorial campaign
    what a damn shame..
    I'm flipping you around like pancakes
    to make some breakfast you need to break some damn eggs
    ie. MC's
    don't make me angry like the 03 film of Ang Lee
    yo I'm amazin [a mason] like Wolfgang A. Mozart
    you find my rhymes
    hard to understand like putting Kant in the hands of a lowlife
     
  10. Fool

    Fool Member

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    Good god, this thread is sick
    though half of you are bombs starting to tick
    So lets get it started
    With ye olde English before I'm departed
    Tiss a sad sight
    'cause your a blight
    upon the queens english
    My fight with you is no quarrel
    I shoot up your rhymes like fish in barrel
    I have aquired the swagger
    of a drunk on XX Lager (Dos Equis Lager; Mexican Beer)
    Your english is revolting, I'm sure
    Go hide, before I do you up like Shakur
    Is there something wrong with slant rhymes
    Son, keep up with the times
    Jerm, I'm tearing you up for reason
    because kicking ass is open for me every season
    You must be tripping
    Maybe some of that four loco your sipping
    This shell is loaded for you
    I'm about to unload on you like it's waterloo
    While you swallow that shelled sonata
    Now now, there's no reason to cry to your mama
    Go weep on someone else's shoulder
    Rhymes crippled like a coyote stuck under a boulder
    Trying to escape, you chew a leg off
    only to be staring down the barrel of a musical sawed off
    Poetically Inclined, and Intellectually chosen
    Fly like Ludwig Beethoven
    Poetic Death has arrived
    No one will be revived
     
  11. Riss

    Riss Elite Member

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    ^

    A fool who persists in his folly becomes wise
    a Fool writing weak rhymes on bombingscience dies
    you've got less flow than Queen Elizabeth's arteries
    step to me, I hope you've got a lotta practice playing the lottery
    like fine chicks and beatiful cutie's you're under me
    it's far from hard to tell
    like Nas and well, we both know you fail hard like Gargamel
    let me spell it out: me beats you
    it's like a motherfucking BBQ
    I've already planned the rapture, this is just a sneak preview
    I'm a master, nobody can fit these shoes
    like Sasquatch, I'm quick to smash whack fucks and act up
    like a psychopath, WHAT?!
    you've run into some majer ass bad luck
    like Donald Duck
    and you can almost spot
    Gladstone Gander out the side of your eye, playing violin
    motherfucker you better buckle up cause I'm wild and violent
    my styles the darkest
    black as panthers just as fast and militant
    cointelpro can blow
    me hard and gag while I'm on crack and stimulants
    my flow's the most intact and virulent
    Fool just overdosed like a bag of crystal meth
     
  12. theking

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  13. Riss

    Riss Elite Member

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    ^
    Yo Ludvig I guess you need a little knowledge to understand me
    feel the guillotine aswell as your dame Marie
    I'm furious and just as fast G
    but fuck a Diesel, I run on on plutonium axe D-
    O-C, Brown
    you're innocent like Charlie
    I'm the wildest most styled MC - Fly like Marty
    lyrics that puzzles you
    indignationally driving like Jigsaw
    wake up with a clock infront of you and a black stud fucking you
    as the tape plays this song and you
    crumble like the french at Waterloo

    Ka to the zaaaam! =]
     
  14. jerm_haf

    jerm_haf Senior Member

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    Dope shit is what this threads evolved to
    Riss you jigsaw? Well hear how i solve you
    I wont just run circles ni66a i will revolve you
    I spit so much fire that it will disolve you
    D-O-C brown? I'm D-O-C Rivers
    Stay coachin the game making opponents shiver
    Dont test me. Im not a forgiver
    No, i'm not brown, but I will deliver
    Bringing you the heat and i dont plan to cool down
    Try to cool off and youll probably just drown
    Ive made my name and im working on the crown
    You wont have to look for me cuz ill be around town
     
  15. Riss

    Riss Elite Member

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    Here I go again with that vile flow again
    always on top - like nobelmen
    the dopest thing since a loaf of bread
    filet mignon, redwine, fuck your loathsome gin
    it's bedtime...
    I'll cool down your heat with ease
    in my Rock Steady Freeeez-er
    beeee smart and read my
    words like a mexican peasant extracts ki's from coca leaves
    no aurum
    like a manneqin merged with Gollum
    real prestiiiiige uh
    like a Chrysler, from the fifties
    bitch please
    I'm the rhymer, smacking you down with just a single mighty cypher
    throwing you round like Betty Heidler
    heil my style while my eyes is miles ahead like China
    you fall easily
    piece of pie
    like painting a sunday night trackside graffiti peice with a piece of mind
    meet defeat, eat feces, leave or die
    boom biddy bye bye, kiddie
    I smash mics from city to city
    voice smooth, words that rolls like Royce fool
    fuck your Milli Vanilli-
    schtick Billy, just go bite me
    stuff up your whack rhymes where the sun most likely don't shine G.
     
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  16. Fool

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    You say your a nobleman
    But your just a serf
    with a nasty farmers tan
    your underfoot like papa smurf
    Like Gollum
    your minds been bent
    We're not solemn
    Ashes UPS sent
    One Rhyme to rule them all
    Or in your case one institute's grand hall
    My clock's ticking your folly
    every second is another moments volley
    Hittin' so hard
    your floppy like Dali
    I send a notice in your regard;
    eviction time
    stop the smoke n' mirrors, Mr.Mime
    I'm like the Ironchef
    Your like an easy bake oven
    Style like Treble Cleff
    Rhymes bitter, like you don't get any lovin'
    You mind leaving the scene
    Rhymes like a immature pre-teen
    Your in the dark;
    Cask of Amontillado
    I've made my mark
    I just changed the worlds motto.
     
  17. Riss

    Riss Elite Member

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    Fine rhymes
    but they ain't nothing like mine
    so get the sword and the shield in place
    cause now it's my time
    injecting words so hard the needle breaks
    the sense you make is minimal man
    the quantity of logical flaws is pituful and
    it's worthless pointing out - the individual stands
    so you might aswell be logging out
    before I start bugging out
    contrary to you I correct like mathematics
    fooling around on a high level like aerobatics
    utterly smashing whacklings
    humiliating weaklings
    throwing reality in your face like a raging fist kid
    out to shatter your make belief shit
     
  18. swovr

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    Riss, I'll admit you are pretty good
    but this isn't the suburbs dude, it's the motherfuckin' hood
    I don't have time to read the lines inbetween
    of your over-dressed up fancy-ass rhymes nobody understands what you mean.
    and don't take that as a bad thing.
    I mean it's good you can spell
    but how's that gonna help you when you're clearly going to hell
    for the whack ass shit you always put up on a wall
    don't even attempt that outline, you're a toy just fall
    off, and move back into your moms house
    safe and sound, and you can watch me take off her fuckin' blouse
    but that I guess isn't a bad thing either
    cause she can take care of you and even make you dinner
    look over your shoulder at your sketches and call you a winner
    at least you'll get big ups from your mom, right?
    oh and that retarded 14 year old next door, what's his name.. tom wright?
    there ya go, some respect on the streets
    hope I just made your day, maybe even your week. BLAHHH!!!

    I'm sure your walls are dope, no hate haha.
     
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  19. geza_arts

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    hood suburb its the fuckin net, living behind the screan , talking shit thinking that your mean, you aint shit, that is it, get, hit, with these rymes, commiting art crimes, people these days are faker then the brest on a celeberties chest, your all like the rest, you guys aint ill you aint sick, your a dike look a like, with a dick, you fuckin prick, going hard on this, fuckit im done go ahead and look up b slum!!!
     
  20. Norfsuthr

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    Out in the suburbs and still I shit a verse and make you eat those words, you always wanna say fuck but try to fight the urge, but me I got vocab for days watch me splurge like a pyre of benjis to watch you burn. My style is envied so you watch and learn talk on turn or get stomped on the curb. I'm FUCKIN sly, young and high, and cocky but I got you on the run like ghadafi, tongue tied and coming sloppy I can see you getting nervous but rest assured you deserve this for speaking without purpose. My word is scripture, I'm built for worship like churches. Read this aloud as if its torah, explore my metaphors with dora cause your childs play to outshine like flood lights to auroras
    Bitch.