Baise you're lines are pretty shakey, and the A looks really tall and skinny compared to the S and E. i think you should spend a while just throwing this shit on paper over and over again. it's an alright start i guess but needs a ton of work. cheers MTK, it's a little sloppy. i don't like the E either. been trying shit out with an upper case E that i think i can work with. i think the lower case one like in that pink one is a bit fat looking.
ya that pink one is dope homie, may i suggest making the holes in the B and R and E white tho, to match the O a lil more & cuz the shadow is white in the backround, idk may look better,.
@Broke - on the pink one, the idea of the middle bump on R's is to match up with the line coming off of the left leg. This may not be the best example to show, but this is what I mean:
the bump in the R, i duno why i even put that in there. i don't like it, and the white back ground is cause... well maybe i forgot to colour it . but cheers for the crits. any crits on the others? Ribs, the T on the REFLECT doesn't quite fit in i don't think. the Reach on the other hand is cool. the H pops to fuck!! not too sure on the MASSIVE set of balls though....
wachu mean breh, if u seen it in person ud be able to see the lil spray dots from how clean my hand movements were. Idk where it was benched at, but where I painted it I had to reach to paint it too
@knowledge - your bombs are original but could prolly go with some tweaking. i think they lack flow @ribcage - whats up with a painted bomb sometime?