get the fuck outta here dude. you porlly came back here to bite. Be loyal to that other forum and dont come around here. KICK ROCKS *****! @zeta I like the grimeyness of it, but the letters suck... keep expirementing @block you should have kinked your L, and kept the O the same. Would have balanced the piece. Those little bumps on the letters are stange, and dont really add anything visually because theres not many of them... your on the right track tho keep doin ya thing
bruzr, those are honestly two sick ass pieces, and those throws are tight too. only crit i can think of is maybe the pyramid in the last one coulda been done better. block, i don't like the random geometry lying around the piece, including the little circles reach mentioned. the L and O also seem like they should take up more space than they do. goof, looks like a tumour, get rid of those extensions/lumps/whatever. for your first ever attempt at graffiti though that's damn good, way better than my first. gimp, keep practicing straight letters, and practice keeping all your barsthe same thickness throughout the whole piece.
Sounds, aye the tumour/lumps don't go with the flick style that it seems to have taken on. Need to tighten up the G as well I rate. Cheers man.
pit, i like thoes alot dude especailly the paint major props for getting that character up looks good. im sure you mean it to be that way, but i feel like you should fix it's eyes so it looks more impressive. great work though. Toy Incoming any suggestions for either of these? did them in school so no great color selection. any tips as to what i should fill in the background with and stuff? real toy hahah
Personally i think your focused too much on the fill and less on letter structure. The fill is dop as balls but it seems a bit excessive especially since the letters are only so-so Bringing back one of my old styles. Crits?
ZETA, the bottom of the E and the left bar of the A look especially whack. Just sayin you should mess with em some more
Zeta- the T could use some more definition. the Ecovers to much of it. Hexx-dont see the E or C. getting better though. keep working on the letter structure. keep it simple bro CRIT IT UP BRAHHHHHHH
Hex - i think u should stick to block letters for now Zeta - the two pieces on the previous page look pretty cool, but, no hate, this just looks bad Block - looks good, but i would make the bottom of the C the same as the top line from the movie Fast Times at Ridgemont High crits please
Dope movie, but the character in the O and the piece as a whole is kind of plain, you should try and give it a little bit more personality and flow
I really feel the eyes are the best part of the raccoon My self-crit: I d fix the proportions and the ear. It wasnt quite as accurate, as it should have been. Cheers
For a first 3d number and character that's a pretty damn good effort, especially with the paint job. Played man. This was my first ever sketch, before I went for Goofy. Way too wild-style to start, says 'Astra'