LOL @ Cuore Millinx: Make your S more like a box and don't let it over lap. Keep all parts of your letters the same width for now and keep that width consistant from letter to letter. looking for ideas to make these look better. I am looking at the letters alone here, not shakey lines or the shit around them. For instance I don't know how I feel about the top of the K or if I should use a capital A and N.... and I am still have to do an I. I will work on flow etc when I put them all together.
thanks. I'm not liking the top of the K and am looking for ideas to give it more character. I still need to work out an I and then work on possible connections. I like the T a lot.
Thanks Peter, those letters are looking dope too. Also, wondering if someone who can actually draw who might wanna make this idea look good. Only drawing the 3-d bit of a letter. An idea, but suck at doing. I know it's shit, not looking for crits.
Thanks for the crits guys. Much appreciated. I'm gonna stick to a much simpler style from now on. I jumped the gun a bit. As for the ceiling tile idea, his landlord actually recommended it. We gotten most of the ceiling done. I'll take pics soon.
The Sketch, and the final. I accidently'd the bottom part of the E. That's what I get for half way paying attention to the piece, then half listening to the teacher. Fuck it.
aiaw: i think i cant look at that, because it makes me wanna smack a child. go more simple, no extensions, no overlapping letters, no colours, no arrows, no random shit. just do keyboard letters and nothing else, thatll get you somewhere
tempo sounds like the ultimate faggot. skina- yo lose those arrows you have and even out some of those bars, it has a bit too many angles n shit, but its not too bad, just clean it upp
Bump. Crit it jews. Skina: IMO Good. I would lose the arrows. I would make sure to keep that top bend on all of your letters on the same level. That way it looks cleaner. It might be just me, but it seems to be a little off.
synone: that canvas panel is decent. Your E is hidding too much imo and part of it is missing all together. Not a bad show all in all.