Dank - Nice throw, I love those E's they smash. But that D. You might need to define it a tad bit more. You don't want people thinking that's a O. It might look more defined if the image wasn't flipped. I just can't really tell.
@synone.......make ur last letter t to a T. imo it would look better with all caps or all lower case soo ye anyone crits on mine
S goes too low, I is a T. Keep at it... skewt- I like your W, consider doin something like this with the bottom tho oie_52027GdfckaTC
SAM- i like em both but my one crit is the R on the bottom one doesnt so much look like a R. if theres a whole i cant see it
not bad witch reminds me of my older throws now start letting the pen flow letters will develop a more natural flow rather than lookin forced.