I've recently started doing some handstyles and working on a name. I finally settled on ENDS, but made the mistake of showing people the sketches of them etc. I have a couple other names I have in mind, and am wondering if I should change my name. Also, I have a picture of a couple quick handstyles of 3 different names looking for crits, etc.
tra kind liar - im sorry but that looks horrible i cant make out one letter, u need to just work on Key Board letter right now askew - do not go crazier, and those should be in the toy tags thread, not here. both u guys should also go check out the new to graffiti forum since u are both just starting
wait wait... i was just doing random shapes, i didnt do letters..... well damn.. is this feed just for letters?
This is graffiti. Rarely you'll find 3d pieces but otherwise yes, its letter based. And hold back on giving advice.
Couple unfinished things, crits would be appreciated... View attachment 617848 View attachment 617849 View attachment 617850
the B and E on the second one is the only thing I like. what happened to the steaz like form your last battle entries? some bullshit
Phat I know I'm not one of those respectable men. So I'm not going to really crit it. But one thing I noticed was that the N in Absorbing seemed to be hidden to much.
haha syn, I didn't mean to say that you're not respectable, I was just referring to the guys that have a bit more experience in this stuff, coz their comments are usually more accurate and useful.. anyway, we painted that piece today and it was fucking exhausting, it's a highway spot, and the thing is MONSTROUS really. it's so big, I couldn't fit the whole thing in one photo despite the fact that I crossed the road to take the flick. I ended up taking a lotta consecutive flicks which I'm gonna stick together. will post the thing once I get the patience and physical strength to use photoshop again... thanks for the input though everyone
I tried to do like a 3d crack ordeal in this. But I was so blunted I went with too many cracks so... I fucked that one up.
syonone one 3d will look better, get rid of the 3d for the outline. The E and W look ok, play with those letters, just go crazy with them.
Looking for some crits on this before I ink it up. I think I need to make the K smaller. The 3d missing on the W is already fixed. Didn't notice before I posted.
I understand that u never post in here g but anyway that is a nice share n' on the real, good concept, unseen 2 me, nice touch AYO Phat question for you since I gotchu readin n ish do mathematics ever come into putting up a piece?
@syn lay down 2 horizontal lines before you sketch, cause the ewt is like a half inch higher than the rest. Then look at all your bar widths and make them consistant( whole T, top of E, top of S, bottom of S). Then look at the negative space of all your letters, the worst part is the space between the K and E at the top, find a way to get rid of that.
Ribcage - Agreed with the letters being higher up. But one thing. The bars I purposely made them uneven. Like thin to thicker.