U need to fix those faces a lil but that first one os pretty simple and good. Thar second one is the one I like nut work on hands cuz they looks like trash
crits please.. few sketches in my black book, trying out different throwies etc. tell me what i should fix.
tryin to work out a new throw, heres a rough one, any crits on the general throw? i know the lines are rough, sharpies are a bitch, I was drawing in my bed, and i still need work. Picture 152 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
Colors- like the stickers, but try branching into your own style Cwks- Love the character and the letters in the first one, work on your letter structure in the second one though
Kapi- love your work and your style. Keep it up. SkateJunt- Looks pretty good, Just clean up the 3d effect a bit and your sig at the bottom looks a little forced, let it flow man
Peter- That purple burns man, good job. Freekofart (which i read as freako fart)- Hell yeah man, this is the stuff I like to see and inspires me to keep writing. I would just add some thickness to your sig because it kinda gets lost in the shuffle of awesomeness your shit puts out.
When you're trying to advance your work, you may miss the fact that your bars get fucked up. Keep playing around with your straights and bars and work off what you excel at.
i alwasy try to take in whatever anyone has to offer! well as long as it sounds correct! but i thought my bars were pretty acceptable? the k is a little off i thought.
the K, E, and O all have fucked up bars. the B is the only letter that is acceptable as far as simps go